Chapter 558 Surprised Comics

? This kind of feeling is that I haven't mentioned it much before, but it suddenly appeared later, which made readers feel strange.

The strongest sense of fragmentation is actually changing the map. When creating, don't be too obsessed with one place or a certain aspect in the early stage, and don't give readers a sense of closure.

In terms of food types, in this respect, "Spirit of the Halberd" has been handled very well in the early stage, such as the use of molecular cuisine, Chinese cuisine and French cuisine, especially in the autumn selection competition of the first grade. His eyes lit up.

But the ensuing problem is that a large number of innovative delicacies are produced at a time, making it difficult for subsequent dishes to surprise people.

As for "the-blue", the chefs cook with chainsaws or small guillotines...well, Shen Xin doesn't know how to cook either, so I won't comment on it.

But what Shen Xin wants to say is that whether it is the lack of variety of dishes or the self-contradictory setting, it is not as good as the other point, the sense of fragmentation caused by the map.

In the middle and early stages of "Spirit of the Halberd", the map of the manga is mainly in Yuanyue Academy or nearby places. With the development of the story, Yuanyue Academy and the progress of the plot gradually do not match, and new ones need to be introduced. "map".

Originally, "Ghost Father Chapter" was a good opportunity to bring the world outside Totsuki Academy into the readers' field of vision, but for some unknown reason, Fuda Yuto gave up this approach, resulting in the following plots being different from the previous ones. There is a problem with the connection in the plot.

The tearing caused by the "map", or the impact of the protagonist entering different "maps", is actually a very serious problem. Including online articles, there will always be things that cause the score to collapse due to the change of the map.

Compared with practitioners, the number of authors who can solve this problem is really too small.

Taking the city in the web as an example, the biggest change of map is from the city to the cultivation, but most of them collapse here. Those who have passed this hurdle are almost the best in the city.

Shen Xin's words gave Xi Muhan some ideas, she nodded slightly, and said softly: "If you want to add foreign dishes, you really need to prepare well."

"Not only must there be dishes from other countries, but also foreign contestants—by the way, if there are foreigners, the language...how do you deal with it? After all, there is a language barrier." Shen Xin asked curiously.

"ah?"

Xi Muhan blinked his eyes, originally he didn't think about foreign cuisine,

He really doesn't need to worry about language differences, but now he has to seriously consider it.

"Remember, for a character that only appears once, you can make the other party not understand Chinese. If it is a permanent character, you must be able to speak Chinese fluently!"

"Huh? Can they all speak Chinese? The readers must be in for a show!" Xi Muhan said in surprise, "Will they complain about the settings?"

"Indeed, rationality must be considered in the creation of a work, but rationality also serves the plot. If the characters don't know Chinese, every sentence they say will be translated by others, and the fluency of the story will be greatly reduced. Therefore, in 11 District, comic characters can speak fluent Japanese even if they are foreigners. When you are creating, just add a reason, explain the reason, and don’t pursue logic too much.” Shen Xin explained.

This article will definitely be recognized as a wise setting by the Reasonable Party, but everyone is in a different position. They only see this, but not why they do it.

If, according to their suggestion, a translator is assigned to the character, and the name and manuscript are revised, they will say, who goes abroad to be a chef/competition/go to school and needs a translator by his side?

If a setting has 10% disadvantages and 90% benefits, then the author must use this setting.

It's not that the author doesn't know the disadvantages of this setting or plot, but that the impact on the whole work and the difficulty of creation must be considered comprehensively.

Lu Ning has been following comics for a long time, and knows some routines, but sometimes it's just speculation, like today, it's really rare for Shen Xin to say it directly.

But the content of these words is more important to Xi Muhan. She is an original work and needs to consider the arrangement of the plot. Therefore, she has to face these issues directly.

"By the way, Sister Yan doesn't seem to be here much recently..."

"Well, Sister Yan has been busy recently. Because of Zuo Yuan's matter."

"Speaking of Zuo Yuan, how is he doing now?" Shen Xin suddenly thought of Zuo Yuan. After the announcement from Duoman.com, he didn't pay much attention to Zuo Yuan - he also had a lot of things to do.

"After "My World" was unsealed, two more chapters were updated, which is considered to be over. He is now working as an assistant to a cartoonist, and draws the name of the new comic by the way. I heard that he will also create short stories. After getting approval , to be uploaded."

"Normal. After all, he hasn't broken out in "Comic Future". Although "Minecraft" has signs of rising, it was snuffed out before it could raise its head. In fact, Sister Yan also wanted to succeed once she did this. .I estimate that he has been drawing names in the past few months. Of course, after a lot of practice and revision, the next comic should improve."

The popularity of a work requires the author's strength, luck and noble people. I don't know what kind of popularity Zuo Yuan's new work will have.

"There is one more thing, Sister Yan just mentioned it...but it doesn't have much to do with us." Xi Muhan raised his head and recalled.

It doesn't matter much... Then why are you bringing this up?

Shen Xin didn't know whether to laugh or cry, but she still asked subconsciously, "What's the matter?"

"There seems to be a Huaxia comic in District 11, which is a little popular."

"In District 11, there are a few popular Huaxia comics, isn't it common?"

"However, that cartoon is not well-known in China."

"What?" Shen Xin was a little surprised.

According to common sense, it is quite difficult for Huaxia's works to become famous in the 11th district, just like on Earth, it is also difficult for the light in the 11th district to break into the Huaxia market. The novels that readers can see, whether they are officially published or translated by fans themselves, have actually been screened in District 11.

Shen Xin was really surprised if she didn't break out in the domestic market but became famous in District 11.

"What's the title of the book?"

"I don't know..." Xi Muhan scratched his head, a little embarrassed, "Sister Yan only said it once, and it seems to be related to dancing or fighting dance."

What's the difference between that and didn't say?

"It should be "Ran Zhan Dancing Girl", but it is indeed a fighting dance."

In fighting dance, several people are divided into two groups, taking turns in the center of the stage, doing BREAKING movements. At the beginning, the sports channel promoted this kind of movement.

Shen Xin doesn't know much about fighting dance, but she seems to feel very high.

"Dancing dance? It sounds interesting. However, this name sounds familiar." Shen Xin had some impressions, but couldn't remember.

"Teacher, Zuo Yuan had an accident not long ago, and someone swiped his ticket to replace "Minecraft" with "Chaos Dancer." Lu Ning reminded.

"So it's that work..." Shen Xin nodded slightly, suddenly becoming interested in this comic.

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