Chapter 577: Shen Xin's Judgment

Wang Wenhong blinked, holding a pen in his hand, unable to write a word for a long time.

Shen Xin divided the scores into four parts, namely "Story", "Storyboarding", "Painting Skills" and "Mesh Dots & Effect Lines". The total scores are 50/20/20/10 respectively.

Although there is no comment, it is clear at a glance where points are deducted, at least in Wang Wenhong's view.

The same is true.

He carefully read a few cartoons, then looked back at the ratings, analyzed them carefully, and felt that the deductions were all reasonable.

Even though there were a few points that were contrary to his opinion, after thinking about it carefully, I felt that Shen Xin's judgment was more accurate.

This is also no way.

He can judge the "plot" is good or bad, but in terms of "storyboarding" and "painting skills", after all, he is not as good as Shen Xin, and even if it is about the plot, he and Shen Xin also have some differences of opinion, so we can only After Shen Xin finished the manuscript, I will ask about the scoring rules.

"Able to use storyboards to fully express the content of the story. At the same time, the use of dot paper and wiring is also good. The content of the story is boring..."

Hearing Shen Xin speak suddenly, Wang Wenhong was startled, quickly picked up a pen, and wrote down Shen Xin's words.

However, after hearing the comments, he could already feel that the score of this comic would definitely not exceed 60 points.

"55 points."

really……

Hearing this score, Wang Wenhong got a black line, and another low score... No, this score should be ranked in the top 10...

Mr. Shen, you set the score too low, right?

Wang Wenhong sighed in his heart, but he didn't make a sound.

Just like what Shen Xin said, anyway, 10 people are accepted, and it is enough to recruit from high to low.

In fact, Shen Xin was even more depressed in her heart. She read the comics all night, but these comics... don't matter.

Comics and reality are consistent in many places. After all, their essence is telling a story-an interesting story.

some,

The front seems to be stable, but the ending is often unexpected and even applauded. The typical representative is O. Henry.

However, in order to achieve this effect, people have done a lot of foreshadowing in front, making readers feel "unexpected, but reasonable".

And the plots of these authors cannot withstand scrutiny at all, the content in the front is superficial, and the last page is heavy. After reading it, I was at a loss.

There are also some comics with big play settings, and the pages are full of dense words, which makes people look dizzy.

Please, even if it's not Xiaobai's kind, at least people can understand it, right?

Shen Xin does not recommend short comics to use too complex a system, because it is difficult to express cumbersome content in a limited space.

There is an invisible limit to how many dialog boxes there are in a grid of comics. If there are too many dialog boxes, it will appear bloated.

In the same dialog box, there is also a certain requirement for the number of words. Therefore, the author may have to turn over a sentence of dialogue and consider it many times in order to express more meaning in as few sentences as possible.

Although not prescribed in writing, these are accepted by the authors.

Just like the Internet, many of them are one sentence.

Can online authors know that a paragraph expresses a meaning—well, a few people may really not know—but the reason why they do this is to cater to the screen of the mobile phone.

Of course, the author can also write long paragraphs, but those words are piled up on the screen, and many readers are not in the mood to read them, but a paragraph or one sentence makes readers feel very relaxed when reading.

Therefore, there are some unwritten rules.

If an author says that he only writes long paragraphs, of course that's okay, and it's not a dead rule. However, the final decision on whether to pay is the reader, and the reader must be satisfied.

Going back to the comics, the dialog box covers the character's face, and it hasn't been modified yet... Do you really think you are the old thief Fu Jian? There are no characters on a page, all text, or will someone buy it?

Seeing these settings, Shen Xin really has nothing to say.

"Brother Wang, don't let me read the call for papers for "Youth Future" in the future." Shen Xin sighed.

Hearing Shen Xin's words, Wang Wenhong immediately picked up his pen.

"Brother Wang, "Young Future" from now on... No, I almost got caught off guard."

Wang Wenhong thought it was a comment, and wrote a few words, but suddenly realized something was wrong, and quickly strung up half of the sentence.

"I said, Mr. Shen, can you stop saying something suddenly, it's very embarrassing."

"Ah?" Shen Xin looked up at the depressed Wang Wenhong, suddenly realized something, smiled, and then quickly waved her hands, "I just sighed."

"I also know that the quality of authors has declined. For one thing, this is the solicitation for "Youth Future", and the grade is definitely not as good as "Comic Future". In addition, the 'Golden Paintbrush' award has indeed attracted a large number of capable newcomers. Comic web serialization."

Shen Xin raised her brows slightly, this is also true.

"You can't do nothing, can you?" asked back.

The current situation of "Comic Future" is that there must be more high-income authors than Duoman.com, but the magazine is facing a problem, limited by the "capacity" of a single magazine, they cannot afford all the serials.

"Look, now we are waiting for the app of the magazine to come out. The magazine office should also cooperate with the app and take some action. The magazine office will not let this big pie go out."

Shen Xin nodded, and glanced at the manuscript in her hand.

The author and the platform are just a cooperative relationship, not an employment relationship. Only when there is competition can the author get the maximum benefit.

"Huh?" Shen Xin subconsciously glanced at the manuscript in her hand, and couldn't help but snorted softly.

"What's wrong?" Wang Wenhong asked quickly.

""The Cat Back to School"? I remember Teacher Zuo's comics are cats, right?" Shen Xin said.

"yes."

"That's interesting." Shen Xin turned over the manuscript seriously.

He has seen Zuo Yuan's basic skills, which are relatively good. The only problem is that the rhythm and style are not uniform.

As long as he is on the right track, Zuo Yuan may not be able to reach Han Ye's level, but it shouldn't be a big problem to stabilize at tenth place.

The tenth place in "Comic Future" has already made a lot of money for professional cartoonists.

The story happened one afternoon. After lunch, the protagonist returned to the classroom. After being knocked unconscious by a cat that fell from a tree, he was sent to the medical room. However, the soul of the protagonist jumped into the body of the cat. From the perspective of the cat, observe life on campus.

There are no big ups and downs or fluctuations in the whole story, but the plot is fed back to the readers through the observation of classmates.

There are not many dialogues throughout the comic, but there are some light dialogues. Generally speaking, there is no too burning plot, but it is very comfortable to read.

"How about this one?"

Shen Xin tapped on the table twice, took a signature pen, tapped twice, and scored the score.

"Story, 43; storyboarding; 16; drawing skills: 16; dot & effect lines, 7; total score: 82. Edit: (strike out)."

It was the first time Wang Wenhong saw Shen Xin write the editor, although it was omitted later.

"The manga is a good manga... However, it is very difficult to create a series. Please tell Sister Yan this sentence in private. This is my opinion." Shen Xin said seriously.

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