Chapter Five Hundred and Seventy First Comic Structure

First, Shen Xin doesn't know how to cook; second, he doesn't read many cartoons.

Therefore, he has not studied gourmet cooking much.

However, gourmet comics have to explode, which is pure nonsense. "Late Night Canteen" does not have explosions, and "Dungeon on the Bite of the Tongue" ("Maze Rice") also does not have explosions. Moreover, the quality of both comics is very good.

Although these two comics are also about food, they each have their own focus, but in comparison, they are not as pure as "Little Master" and "Spirit of Halberd Eater".

"For comics about food, the plot should be clearer. To put it simply, it is to introduce food. Usually, in order to express the delicious food and attract readers' attention, competitions between different chefs are indispensable."

"There are also competitions in "Ding Shi"." Xi Muhan nodded and said.

"That's fine too. There is a power system... No, is it an upgrade system?" Shen Xin asked.

"What? No, Brother Xin, this is a gourmet manga, how can there be an upgrade system? The characters in "Steel Refining" have never been upgraded from the beginning to the end, have they?"

"Why haven't you been promoted?" Shen Xin retorted, "It's just that the promotion of the protagonist is different from the usual comics. The promotion in "Smelting Steel" is the growth of the protagonist. Edward naively thought at first that the human body that can be used Refinement, revived his mother, but ended in failure. I have seen the customs of other cities, and I have also seen the helplessness of Nina after becoming a synthetic beast. Along the way, Edward has gradually matured. To a certain extent, this It's also an upgrade."

Human growth is the most difficult thing to describe. The protagonists of many online novels are decisive, but they seldom talk about their mental changes.

"Back in "Ding Shi", the change of the protagonist's title, whether it is beginner, intermediate, advanced, or super, this is an upgrade, and the level of the restaurant where the protagonist is located is also an upgrade."

Shen Xin's conversation made Xi Muhan or Lu Ningmao suddenly enlightened, nodding repeatedly, agreeing with Shen Xin's words.

They also know the chef's junior, middle, high, and special grades, but they just think that these are professional titles, and they don't connect them with the upgrade. In addition, Shen Xin mentioned that the restaurant is upgraded, which also makes their eyes shine.

The highest level pursued by the catering industry is a three-star restaurant, which is the highest pursuit of all practitioners.

In fact, works such as comics and novels are similar in nature. As long as the upgrade system or power system is constructed, then you can add suitable plots to the system according to your needs.

Shen Xin put forward two clues at once, and the framework of the story was immediately enriched.

"There is something else to remind you."

Lu Ning and Xi Muhan swallowed their saliva and stared at Shen Xin.

"You've all heard of 'beautiful food', right? This word describes girls as beautiful, but in food comics, the food you draw should also have this effect! Absolutely take the 'shape' and 'color' of the food, Shown through brushes and dotted paper.”

To some extent, the description of food in "The Spirit of the Halberd Eater" has indeed reached the point of "beautiful and delicious".

Lu Ning nodded, this is her task.

"Also, there are too many delicacies in the world, and there are many kinds. It is already remarkable for a person to be able to reach the peak of one type in his whole life. Therefore, a character can only be good at one type of cooking. Among the cuisines, for example, Sichuan cuisine, Sichuan cuisine, and Sichuan cuisine, each cuisine can have a very powerful character, and it can make the character have a distinctive personality."

"Brother Xin, the eight major cuisines are not limited to Sichuan cuisine." Xi Muhan reminded.

"I know, but I don't know about other cuisines either." Shen Xin was very honest, because in "The Spirit of the Halberd Eater", the only Chinese cuisine that can be named is Sichuan cuisine.

All his food-related knowledge comes from the two comics "Little Master" and "Food Halberd".

"..."

Lu Ning and Xi Muhan looked helpless, but no one is perfect. For someone like Shen Xin who struggles to cook instant noodles, knowing a Sichuan dish and the level of a chef is already quite difficult.

They can't ask too much of Shen Xin.

Seeing that the two girls were silent, Shen Xin thought she was thinking about what she said just now, and felt like a teacher in her heart.

"Mr. Shen, you can actually give a few lessons to new writers." Yan Fei walked over holding Zuo Yuan's.

Shen Xin opened her mouth slightly and almost agreed, but fortunately she stopped her words in time and waved her hand slightly, "Forget it. Haven't you heard the phrase 'Wen Wu No. 1, Wu Wu No. 2'? What I said, Others may not agree with it. At that time, if someone excitedly retorts a few words, then I will be asking for trouble."

When creating online novels, some experienced authors wanted to tell novice authors something for free, but they were ridiculed by novice authors. This kind of thing happened more than once.

Therefore, it is enough to talk about it with people you are familiar with. There is no need to give lectures to newcomers. In addition, newcomers may not be able to listen to it.

Everyone's time is equally valuable, and he doesn't need to waste it on these aspects.

After Shen Xin finished speaking, she glanced at the manuscript in Yan Fei's hand again, "The original manuscript?"

"Mr. Zuo's is two or three days later than the agreed time, but the quality is not bad. There are 32 pages in total. I hope Teacher Zuo can work harder."

After Shen Xin heard it, she nodded slightly.

He doesn't know much about these awards, and he doesn't even want to participate. After all, he has already jumped out of that stage and has no extra energy to take care of these things.

"By the way, there is one more thing... Mr. Zuo is good at relatively flat, daily-oriented plots, and this short story is the same. At that time, I told him that comics should have bright spots. I also said a few special words, such as, The protagonist may not even be human! So, he took a cat as the protagonist and wrote the story from the perspective of a cat."

"cat?"

Shen Xin was taken aback for a moment, the name of a novel immediately appeared in her mind, and then she shook her head.

No, it's a comic!

Shen Xin thought of another manga - "A Dog".

"If the main character is a cat... that's fine too. However, to use a cat as the main character, or to describe the whole story from the perspective of a cat, requires the cat to have a human mind and reflect the progress of the whole story through inner activities."

Readers need a sense of substitution, even if it is a cat, readers must feel its thoughts.

Yan Fei made an "ok" gesture with a little relief on her face.

"How is Teacher Zuo now?"

"Not bad. He is also waiting for an opportunity, and now "ComicFuture" is also short of good-quality manuscripts."

"By the way, I heard that you are also working on an app, how are you doing now?"

"It is currently in internal testing, and there are many comics. But there is too little new content, and now the editor-in-chief Zeng Yue is also worried about new comics. New authors have been sucked away by Duoman.com's 'Golden Paintbrush' award, and the pressure on the magazine is too great. Big." Yan Fei sighed.

Shen Xin pursed her lips.

From the current point of view, Duoman.com seems to have affected "ComicFuture", and I don't know how the magazine will respond next. This made him somewhat look forward to it.

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