Chapter 900 Comparison

After the first episode of "Steins;Gate" was serialized, the comment area became the most intense place for discussion in the entire Qingyue.

"Come to sign in first, then read the comics."

"It turned out to be a black and white manga!? The author is too old-fashioned, right?"

"Look at it if you like it, if you don't like to look out!"

"That's right, as long as the manga is interesting, it's ok? Why do you have to fight?"

"Have you read it? I think it's a shame that "Steins;Gate" is on the light reading. This comic should be serialized in "ComicFuture."

"Why?"

"I think the overall quality of the picture is higher than that of "Ding Shi". The script is also better than "Ding Shi". Mr. Lu's painting skills have made great progress."

"It's hard to say anything else, but there's no way to compare the scripts of the two comics, right? One is food with passion, and the other is logic, with different genres. How can they be compared?"

"The first chapter of "Steins;Gate" looks very confusing, and I can't understand it."

"Is this your first time watching Steins;Gate?"

"That's right."

"It is recommended to read the novel first."

"But after reading the novel, doesn't it feel fresh?"

"That's true."

"The novel is going to be published as a booklet, two volumes, one hundred yuan."

"Pfft (vomiting blood), it's so expensive. It would be good if only 70 yuan for two copies."

"Xueda drew 10 color pages and 20 black and white illustrations for "Steins;Gate", and the booklet is still a hardcover edition. Anyway, it is worth the money, right?"

"I think it's worth the money, but there's no money."

"Wait for the first edition to come out and see how the quality is. If there are no flaws, it's no problem to buy a set of booklets. Just use it as a collection."

"Hopefully not too many changes."

"It's basically the original version, but the bad sentences have been modified, and it's all said on the Weibo of "Qichuang Library"."

"That's okay. I was afraid that there would be too many changes, so I changed the ending."

"If the magazine company dares to change the ending, another teacher will definitely be the first one to be unwilling."

"That's true, I should be scared too (smile bitterly)."

"Oh, I still want to read the coloring pages, what should I do?"

"Whether it's a color manga or a black-and-white manga, as long as the quality is high, it's enjoyable to read. A high-quality black-and-white manga is definitely better than a low-quality coloring page. There is no doubt that "Steins;Gate" belongs to the high-quality category! highly recommended!"

...

On Manjia.com, "Stones;Gate" became the center of the topic, and "Steins;Gate" was found out in Qingyue's discussion forum and general discussion forum.

"Ms. Lu is still amazing, this is simply "Steins;Gate" in my mind!"

"Damn it, the scene where Ganglun finds Chris's body is a double-page spread! The screen is too small, and there are too many contents in the screen, it looks a bit bloated."

"I watched it with a pad. It's a little better, but the effect is average. Although the screen is bigger, the impact is not enough."

"Use a monitor! I use a computer monitor to watch it, it's so comfortable!"

"Qingyue doesn't have a website, right? What do you think?"

"There is an emulator! You can read it by downloading the Qingyue app on the computer. You can see many details. It is really comfortable. It can be said that on Qingyue, there is absolutely no quality of a manga. Steins;Gate is better."

"What about "The Devil's Tutor"? Xueda's painting style is also very good."

"Xueda's painter is good, but the person who did the coloring was not Xueda, so it looks a bit awkward."

"Are you content? "The Devil's Tutor" is already better than most of the color manga."

"On Qingyue's ranking list, "Devil's Tutor" and "Stones of Destiny's Gate" are already competing for the first place."

""The Demon King's Tutor" has the upper hand for the time being, right? It has released two episodes, and the third episode will be released soon."

"One thing to say, the quality of these two comics is no less than the top comics in "ComicFuture."

"Guess, "Steins' Gate" and "The Devil's Tutor",

Which one achieved better results? "

"Then I don't know, just wait."

"Time will tell us the answer!"

...

After Lu Yingxue learned that the manga of "Stones;Gate" was about to be serialized, the time suddenly became longer.

At the beginning, he really wanted to draw this comic, but Lu Ning took the lead, so he had no choice but to give up.

If the comic of "Steins;Gate" meets his expectations, then forget it, otherwise, he will definitely "review" this comic on the Internet.

When "Steins;Gate" was serialized, he read it immediately.

Black and white comics are characterized by more expressive lines, which also give readers room for imagination.

When reading the manga of "Steins;Gate", he did feel these characteristics, but he always felt that the picture was a bit awkward, and because he was reading it on a mobile phone, the emotions accumulated in that double page could not be released, which also made him feel uncomfortable. He is a little depressed.

Later, he changed to a 12.9-inch pad and used a double-page display. The advantages and disadvantages of the "Steins;Gate" comics were clearly displayed in front of him.

The storyboard of "Stones;Gate" is better than that of "The Demon King's Tutor". Whether it is Shi Qun or Lu Yingxue, it is not as good as Lu Ning, and there is no way to deny it.

But "Steins;Gate" also has shortcomings. Since the first episode takes place in the radio building, many places have to deal with the transformation of light and dark, which involves the display of light and shadow effects. Lu Ning made mistakes in this regard.

Among them, the painting with the most prominent feature is precisely the page spread - the light source is outside, and Hong Liqi is lying in the small room.

When black-and-white comics encounter this kind of plot, it is best to draw from the outside to the inside. The contrast of light and shadow is high, and it is easier to express details. Len's expression changed to express his shock.

If you look at Gang Lun standing at the door from the inside to the outside, it is likely that the light and shadow are difficult to deal with because of the backlight.

In fact, the same is true. The light and shadow processing on this page is not good, but the storyboard Lu Ning chose can indeed better express the atmosphere of the picture.

Lu Yingxue's storyboard was so-so, and he couldn't figure out how to handle this storyboard better. Thinking of this, he felt a little regretful—it would be great if the details were handled more carefully.

Just when Lu Yingxue sighed secretly, Shen Xin also called Lu Ning to his studio.

"You can't handle this page well." Shen Xin pointed to the double page on the pad, and looked up at Lu Ning.

"I also know, teacher, although web comics are not suitable for double-page spreads, but double-page spreads can make readers feel more shocked. I believe that "Stones;Gate" has a chance to be published as a single book, and then the charm of double-page spreads will be fully utilized Come out." Lu Ning explained.

"No. The angle of the split mirror is against the light, so the effect of this split mirror is greatly reduced. It's best to change it." Shen Xin said.

"But, this... I... this storyboard, I've thought about it for a long time..." Lu Ning was a little anxious, but she still felt that this storyboard best suited the mood of the novel.

"Simple." Shen Xin took out a piece of paper, quickly drew the double-page storyboard on the white paper, and at the same time, drew a box on the right side of Gang Lun's head and next to Hong Liqi, "here A close-up of the facial expressions of the two people should have a better effect. Take the time to change it? Anyway, it is serialized on the Internet, and talk to Editor-in-Chief Zeng Yue, he should be able to help you. As you said, after all, you need to Publishing a booklet."

Lu Ning rubbed her forehead, feeling a little regretful.

She got into a dead end at the time, and even forgot this method. Although it is a double-page spread, it doesn't mean that there can't be close-up shots. Moreover, since there are only Hong Liqi and Gang Lun on the scene, there is no need to draw too formally. Just draw a storyboard next to the two of them to express their expressions.

"Teacher, I'll change it when I get back... By the way, is your short story finished?"

"Wait for the popularity of the first chapter of "Steins;Gate" to go down? It should be ready in three or four days." Shen Xin glanced at Yan Fei who was arguing with Wang Wenhong in a low voice, "Sister Yan, quickly translate the dialogue, immediately It will come in handy."

"Half finished, the remaining half will be ready soon." Sister Yan replied quickly.

Lu Ning was at a loss and couldn't figure it out.

How to draw a short story, still need translation?

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