Chapter 893 Analysis Name

"Really?" Shen Xin did not show any joy when she heard Yan Fei's words, and pointed to the other one and said, "Sister Yan, there is another one."

Hearing this, Yan Fei put away her smile and shifted her gaze to the other one.

The title of the book is the same, it is also "Basketball Boy".

It is mainly about a basketball player who is about to graduate from junior high school. When he went to various high schools to choose a suitable high school, he accidentally met a wheelchair playing basketball on the outdoor basketball court.

The two had a competition, but the special student found that he was not the opponent of the wheelchair youth.

Unwilling to give up, he left, and not long after, he found a wheelchair, and after exchanging wheelchairs with the wheelchair youth, he failed again.

In the end, the special student who lost the competition wanted to ask the young man about his background. The young man said that he was originally a member of the provincial team. Later, he accidentally fell from a building and broke his leg, but he still likes to play basketball, so he came to this school. School, as a basketball teacher.

After hearing the words, the special student finally made up his mind and chose to apply for this school...

Yan Fei frowned as she looked at the cartoon.

The two short stories are both basketball comics, but they represent completely different contents.

The first one is a normal game, which takes place at the last moment of a crucial game. The protagonist who kills the opponent and becomes a heroic character is also the most common routine in Wangdao comics. At the same time, the fierce confrontation that sports comics want to embody is also In this article, it is shown.

The second article is closer to the lives of ordinary people. Since anyone can encounter this kind of thing, readers have a stronger sense of substitution.

In addition, the focus of the two articles is different. The first article pursues "higher, faster, and stronger", while the second article is about blood and sweat, as well as the unyielding character of wheelchair youths for their hobbies.

The first article tells about basketball from a higher dimension, and the second article tells readers that the basketball that ordinary people are familiar with is like this. Everyone does not have superb skills, but they are full of love for basketball.

From Yan Fei's point of view, these two comics have their own advantages and disadvantages. If possible, she would like both. It is estimated that with Shen Xin's artistry, they can fully display the advantages of these two comics.

However, it is impossible for Shen Xin to draw two short stories - 60 pages for each episode and 120 pages for two episodes, which is equivalent to updating half a booklet for free.

Everyone has worked hard for more than a month, but the rewards they get are limited, and the gains outweigh the losses.

Based on this, one must choose between the two.

After thinking again and again, Yan Fei rubbed her hands and looked up at Shen Xin.

"You can only choose one of the two."

"Yes. Even if you choose one of the two, the workload is not small." Shen Xin said.

"If that's the case..." Yan Fei hesitated for more than ten seconds before saying, "I'll choose the second one."

Xi Muhan was flipping through the second copy. Hearing what Yan Fei said, he raised his head and said curiously, "Sister Yan, I think the first one is also very good."

"The first article is not bad, but its advantages and disadvantages are very prominent." Yan Fei sighed.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, a little puzzled.

"The first short story tells the most tense and exciting part of a game. The looks of the reporters and the audience, and the actions and words of the players portray the tense atmosphere in the story. Mr. Shen's storyboard also shows the fierce confrontation of the athletes. As soon as it is shown, my blood boils just by watching it. If the finished product comes out, it will probably be even more exciting and exciting.

"However, within 60 pages, 10 athletes, coaches of both sides, reporters, audiences... too many characters were talked about, and the characteristics of these characters were not created. To be honest, I think , if you want readers to be attracted by the story, the best way is to have a long foreshadowing before this short story. If it is part of a long story, then it is completely ok, even the finishing touch. As for the short story... I'm not so sure it's a whole story, maybe it's more appropriate to say it's part of a story."

Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin nodded, this part is considered the climax of the story, and also the most exciting part of a game, but as Yan Fei said, this is a part of the story, not a complete plot.

The purpose of his writing this article is to let other magazines know the selling points of the next work and make it easier to negotiate, that's all.

"Next." Shen Xin said.

"The advantage of the second article is that it has a strong sense of substitution. Many people have had the experience of playing games in the stadium, and it is easy to resonate with readers. The only difference from other comics is that there is an extra young man in a wheelchair. The theme of the work is high. The disadvantage is that the plot is too plain, and people can see the end of the story at a glance. Perhaps because of space considerations, the wheelchair youth in the work is self-introduction. I think this is the weakest way of expression .It’s better to let others find out than to say it yourself.”

After Yan Fei finished speaking in one breath, she realized that she had refuted Shen Xin's two short stories, but strictly speaking, these two short stories were not as unbearable as she said, and they were also very exciting.

If any of them were handed over directly to the magazine, it would definitely be serialized, and, relying on Shen Xin's previous popularity, she would also be able to gain high popularity.

However, it is also true that these two copies do lack something.

Shen Xin tapped on the table, staring at the second copy in Yan Fei's hand.

In fact, this story is an excerpt from another basketball comic "real" by Takehiko Inoue, which is an inspirational comic about wheelchair basketball.

The reason why he thought of "real" was because he thought of Yang, a young man who also loves basketball but can only sit in a wheelchair.

Seeing that Shen Xin was silent, Yan Fei thought that Shen Xin was hesitating. After a long time, she still felt that she should say a few more words: "Mr. Shen, I know you are very popular in China now, even if your next work It’s just average quality, but it can still sell well. Of course, these two articles are not bad, but as your editor in charge, I still hope that you pay more attention to some details. Are there many people behind?”

"Ah?" Shen Xin looked up at Yan Fei who was standing in front of him, "The modification I was thinking about..."

"Ahem... I'm sorry." Yan Fei coughed twice quickly, a little embarrassed.

"You're right. The structure of the first one is a bit bloated. After all, there are too many characters involved, and the plot is difficult to perfect. So, I decided to use the second one as a blueprint to readjust the structure of the story. It will take about two days The time can be completed." Shen Xin made an "OK" gesture towards Yan Fei, "Since we have to do it, we must do our best."

"Really?" Yan Fei said happily.

Shen Xin's decision was completely beyond her expectation.

"Of course...Xiao Han, find out the photos we took during our travels. I will choose the scene from them. Also, I will also use the photos when we met Yang." Shen Xin looked at Xi Muhan.

"OK."

Xi Muhan returned to his desk, opened the cloud disk, and was looking for photos, while Wang Wenhong walked into the studio weakly, followed by a woman behind him.

Wang Wenhong tapped on the glass door twice, and the three people in the room moved their eyes to the glass door in unison.

When Yan Fei saw the woman behind Wang Wenhong, she was taken aback for a moment, and then she brows happily, "Xiao Li, are you here?"

Shen Xin also recognized the woman in front of her. It was Yan Fei's colleague in "New World", Wu Xiaoli.

"Sister Yan, you are getting married, of course I will come to see you." Wu Xiaoli opened her arms and embraced Yan Fei.