Chapter 783 Dissatisfied

Before, Shen Xin seldom modified the ending of comics, except for "Soul of Chess".

However, it is imperative to modify the ending of "Soul of Chess".

The level of Huaxia Go is different from District 11, one is rising and the other is falling.

Taking the present as an example, in just a few years, Zhen Xi has already taken up the banner of Huaxia Go, competing against Han Go, and even has an advantage.

Therefore, it is reasonable for Xiaoguang to win against Gao Yongxia in the end.

When Shen Xin changed the ending of "Soul of Chess", it was a matter of course.

The ending of "DN" is different from that of "Soul of Chess".

In fact, the ending in the movie is already very appropriate, but there is a logical problem with that ending.

Using the rules of DN, L wrote his name on one of the DNs in advance, so that his life span was only 23 days.

It is impossible for Rem, who often meets with L, to be ignorant of the changes in L's life, but in the movie, there is no indication.

In addition, in the movie, the packet exchange plan was used to replace the DN in Haisha’s hands, but there is another problem. In the movie, the investigation team installed a camera in Haisha’s room and witnessed her past. The process of writing the name on the note.

But it is different in the comics, Yue told Guo Haisha not to use DN in the residence.

After careful comparison, it is not difficult to find that in the comics, Yue's actions are more in line with Yue's personality - the duel between him and L is not over yet, and Yue cannot relax.

Logic... is the most important thing to consider at the end of this comic.

A little carelessness can draw a bad ending.

For this reason, Shen Xin had to spend an afternoon sorting out the rules of DN, and then spent another two days sorting out the next four chapters.

Shen Xin understands that these four words still have some shortcomings, so he is eager to hear other people's opinions.

Especially Yan Fei, as the editor in charge of "DN", she must have a deeper understanding of "DN".

In order to free up time, he could ask several assistants to go back early, and only he and Wang Wenhong were left in the huge studio.

After talking on the phone with Yan Fei, Wang Wenhong went out to buy dinner for Xi Muhan, while Shen Xin flipped through it, looking for logical loopholes.

Things like logic often don't go wrong in big places, and it's often small places that need to be cautious.

Shen Xin had to be careful.

About an hour later, Wang Wenhong came back with three meals, Shen Xin did not expect that even he had one.

Having said that, I do feel a little hungry.

Shen Xin opened the lunch box, grinned, "You got all the lion's heads?"

In the white lunch box, there are four lion heads, which are full of rich color, making people want to swallow them in one gulp.

It's just... the tableware I chose is wrong.

"What's the matter? I haven't improved my life for a long time. Let me relieve my cravings." Wang Wenhong smiled and opened another lunch box, which contained cooked shredded eel.

Based on Shen Xin's understanding of food, he knows that a lion's head is good, and he has eaten other dishes, but he has never remembered their names.

The aroma wafts from the lunch box and fills the air, making people salivate.

Just as he opened the third lunch box, Wang Wenhong's cell phone rang. He glanced at the text message and stood up immediately, "Yan Fei is here, I'll open the door."

"Go."

Shen Xin nodded, Wang Wenhong went downstairs, opened the door and brought Yan Fei in.

"Where is the end?"

When Yan Fei saw Wang Wenhong, she couldn't wait to ask.

"are you not hungry?"

"Hungry, but I want to see the ending of "DN" more."

"Then you have to eat first, maybe you have to stay up all night?"

"Ah? Why?" Yan Fei blinked,

Puzzled.

"Mr. Shen is not satisfied with the ending, he said he needs to modify it." Wang Wenhong said with a wry smile.

"Huh?"

Yan Fei was taken aback, Shen Xin seldom asked for her opinion, so she was surprised by Shen Xin's actions.

"I know what you think, but the reason is not difficult to understand. When cartoonists started, they created very quickly because they had an outline in their minds. However, as the length increases, the logic of the story is also good, and the pictures are neat. Regardless of the degree, there will be a downward trend. Many people think that cartoonists are not so serious about their works.

"Actually, the reason is not that simple. There is an interval between every two works of a cartoonist. During this period, the author can determine the theme of the next comic, and at the same time, it is also a period of recovery of energy and physical strength. Many times, people feel that The quality of the manga has declined in the later stage. It is because the author is not serious, or the preparation is not enough, but he has never considered exhaustion of energy and physical strength...

"Sometimes, even if the author knows what kind of plot is ideal, the author is powerless because of lack of energy or physical strength. This kind of thing should not be uncommon, right?

"Mr. Shen hasn't rested for a long time, and it is serialized in two volumes at the same time. The physical and energy consumption is twice that of ordinary cartoonists, or even more."

While talking, the two went up the stairs.

"So, Teacher Shen's physical condition is not good?" Yan Fei suddenly realized, and then felt that it might be misunderstood, and explained, "I want to ask, is Teacher Shen's physical strength or energy showing fatigue?"

Shen Xin has been working continuously for too long, the last time the magazine was closed was during the Chinese New Year, and if I look forward, it will probably be the time when Shen Xin is injured and rests.

After "Steel Refining" ended, Shen Xin didn't serialize it in "ComicFuture" because she was preparing for "DN", but at that time, "Y's" had already been updated on Duoman.com.

From this point of view, Teacher Shen's physical strength and energy may indeed reach the limit.

Wang Wenhong shook his head.

"Not exactly. In fact, the ending of "DN" has already come out, but Mr. Shen was not satisfied, so he asked you to come over and make revisions. It is estimated that tonight may stay up all night."

Stay up all night?

Yan Fei frowned.

It seems that things are not simple.

"The quality is not good?" Yan Fei was puzzled.

"No, actually, I don't think it's a problem, it fits well with the current story...Maybe Mr. Shen thinks more?"

Taking advantage of the time when the two went upstairs, Shen Xin printed out two copies of the follow-up of "DN".

"Sister Yan, Brother Wang deliberately bought you food. I just came back. Is it still hot?"

Wang Wenhong opened his mouth, wanting to refute, but the words got stuck in his throat, but seeing Shen Xin winking at him, he restrained himself.

"Is he so kind?" Yan Fei said mercilessly.

"Of course. Brother Wang bought the dishes from a restaurant far away."

Yan Fei frowned, the other dishes were fine, but the eel dish looked a little scary.

Many girls have inexplicable resistance to this kind of long and sticky food, and Yan Fei is no exception.

"Don't look, eat your meal first." Wang Wenhong handed Yan Fei a box of rice and a bottle of iced Coke, "I'm sure I'll be busy later when I'm full."