Chapter 810: Each Has a Ghost

The cat-eared lady brought up the milk tea, and Shi Qun immediately picked up the coffee and took a sip.

Fan Yinmo pulled it out, and immediately saw the cover of this episode, and a huge line of words came into view - "Devil King's Tutor".

It reads like a cartoon about tutoring. Fan Yinmo has never seen this kind of subject matter.

With a trace of doubt in his heart, Fan Yinmo officially began to read this document.

The protagonist is a person with average academic performance but very hardworking.

The family members were always worried about his grades, so they deliberately went to the tutoring center to hire a tutor, but after three or four attempts, his grades did not improve, and his parents were helpless.

A text message was sent from the parents' mobile phone, and it was an advertising text message from an organization claiming to be "Devil Tutor". With the mentality of giving it a try, the parents invited a tutor from the "Devil King Tutor" institution.

Therefore, the tutor helped the male protagonist in his studies, but the male protagonist's grades still did not improve significantly. After cross-examination, he found out that someone in the school bullied him. After learning the reason of the incident, the tutor helped the protagonist knock down the person who bullied him, and his grades also improved accordingly.

The story is very vulgar, but Fan Yinmo thinks it is very interesting.

The story of the protagonist being bullied by his classmates is narrated through the mouth of the protagonist, and the atmosphere of the whole story is not depressing. When reading, the reader will not feel uncomfortable inside.

In addition, when reading, "The Devil's Tutor" even has some plots of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Readers can feel the pretense of the "tutor" all of a sudden.

Fan Yinmo finished reading 40 pages in one breath, feeling unfinished in her heart.

Of course, page 40 is just a pickaxe. If you want to serialize, you must modify it, and many details must be modified.

As for how to modify it...how did he know? You have to ask a better manga artist.

Tamagawa Haruka is already serializing now, and he definitely won't have time, so he can only find someone else.

"By the way...is this your first talk?" Fan Yinmo asked curiously.

"That's all. This is a short comic... If I submit a manuscript, it's impossible for the magazine to give me a chance to serialize it right from the start?" Shi Qun struggled.

Fan Yinmo nodded: "That's true. However, under normal circumstances, if newcomers want to hand over to the magazine, they need to hand in the original manuscript."

"Original... original manuscript?" Shi Qun's face turned pale, he was a little confused, and he forgot to drink the coffee in his hand.

Fan Yinmo knocked on the table twice, resting his chin, lost in thought. Shi Qun looked at Fan Yinmo expectantly, hoping to get some experience and advice from him.

However, Fan Yinmo was thinking about another thing, which was related to and.

The two of them remained in a stalemate for a long time without saying a word.

"Can I take this back home first? In such a short period of time, it is difficult for me to read this in detail. Moreover, if I have to revise it, it will not work for a day or two. You know, I am still serializing comics."

Fan Yinmo had a general direction in his mind, sat up straight, and looked at the group of stones.

Shi Qun's face changed slightly, he stared at the manuscript in Fan Yinmo's hand, feeling a little embarrassed.

"Are you short of money?" Seeing Shi Qun's hesitation, Fan Yinmo immediately changed the subject.

"Ahem, there are some." Shi Qun nodded.

"Well, I still have 20,000 yen here, you can use it first... Otherwise, I will return this to you." Fan Yinmo casually took out two 10,000-yen bills from his wallet.

They go to school in District 11, and they need to use District 11 money.

"That...that's not necessary." Shi Qun waved his hand, "Although I don't have much money, I still have no problem with my normal life."

"This amount of money is nothing to me, so I don't need you to pay it back. I think you worked very hard to give you the money. The domestic comic market is huge, and you will definitely have a chance to show your strengths in the future." Fan Yinmo said With a straight face, he said, "I don't want people like you to be trapped by money."

Shi Qun's eyes were wide open, looking at the sincere Fan Yinmo, he felt warm in his heart.

He was really afraid that Fan Yinmo would take it and walk away.

If Fan Yinmo sincerely refuses to give it to him,

He was at a loss for words.

But now that 20,000 yen is placed in front of him, it is a lie to say that he is not moved. With this money, even if Fan Yinmo really swallowed it privately, he felt that he would not lose money.

That's right, if this short story can be serialized, his income will definitely be more than 20,000 yen. But the premise is that he must be able to serialize.

He has painted similar ones, no less than five copies, and he didn't earn a single yen, let alone twenty thousand yen.

After all, this is gambling.

If he wins, Fan Yinmo will hand over the revised one to him, and at worst he will give Fan Yinmo a sum of money back.

If he loses, he will get 20,000 yen for nothing, which is much better than not getting anything at all, and it will be regarded as the first manuscript fee he has received—although it is a little small.

After continuous setbacks, people are very realistic, and Shi Qun is no exception.

"Teacher Fan, I..."

"Needless to say, no matter how much you say, you just don't consider me a friend." Fan Yinmo waved his hand, not giving Shi Qun a chance to refuse, "I'll take it back and think about it carefully. You. If you don’t agree, put it here, and I won’t take the 20,000 yen. Old Shi, it’s up to you.”

After Fan Yinmo said this, Shi Qun was too embarrassed to refuse, so he took advantage of the situation and said, "Then I will trouble Teacher Fan."

After getting it, Fan Yinmo didn't need to stay any longer, and said to Shi Qun to "go back and see", and stood up.

While checking out, he ordered another sundae, milk tea and strawberry cake for Shi Qun before leaving the cafe.

Shi Qun thanked him again and again, and watched Fan Yinmo leave.

"I didn't expect Fan Yinmo to be so nice? I should have gotten to know him earlier..." Shi Qun dug out a spoonful of the sundae and put it in his mouth, feeling indescribably comfortable.

With Fan Yinmo tucked under his arm, he hailed a taxi, and after telling the location of the apartment, the taxi drove forward slowly.

At this moment, Fan Yinmo couldn't help laughing out loud.

Today's harvest far exceeds his imagination.

This one is indeed of high quality. Although he can't come up with better suggestions for revision, he also knows that this comic has flaws. But he was able to read this and find it interesting, which shows that the flaws are not concealed.

Of course, if you want to get results, you have to polish it well, which is one of the reasons why he wants to take it over. He needs to listen to the opinions of professional cartoonists to see if this job has the potential to become a big hit.

As for swallowing this... the only way to do it is when your brain is pumped.

If it was a long comic, he might have the idea of ​​moving, but what Shi Qun let him read this time was just a short story with many flaws.

What is the use of short stories?

Useless.

What he cared about was not Shi Qun, but Shi Qun.

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