Chapter 668: Yan Fei's Worries

Shen Xin nodded again and again when she heard Yan Fei's words.

Just like "Saint Seiya", the combination of constellations and holy clothes is an excellent idea.

If Masami Kurota only focused on the constellations and holy clothes, there would definitely not be such a wonderful and exciting plot as "Pluto's Zodiac".

The same is true for "DN", the note is just a brain hole, and what really supports the whole story is the game between Ah Yue, L, and Nia. The note is only used as a prop to advance the progress of the story.

"I will seriously think about this issue in the next few days."

Even though Shen Xin already knew how to deal with Oba Tsugumi, he still held his breath and didn't tell the whole layout of the manga.

"DN" is a reasoning comic, there is logic between each plot, and the plot often has unexpected changes.

It is indeed difficult for normal people to create a complete name in a short period of time.

It is also because of this that Shen Xin won't act too ostentatiously, which is of no real benefit to him.

Yan Fei didn't answer Shen Xin's words, but looked through the name again, and frowned.

"What's wrong, Sister Yan?" Shen Xin was a little puzzled seeing Yan Fei's serious expression.

"Something is wrong..."

"Um?"

"The Cheat Finger of "DN"..." Yan Fei looked up at Shen Xin, "I thought at first that the Cheat Finger of "DN" and "Punishment" were the same, but after watching it, I felt that there were too many differences between the two. Different, but what it is, I can't remember for a while... Now, I finally understand that the biggest difference between the two comics lies in Goldfinger."

"The book of prophecy is only to predict the future of others. You can profit or harm from the future. "DN" is to judge the life and death of others. As long as you know the name and appearance of the other person, you can determine the fate of others. This cheat is too buggy …Wouldn’t the person who got this golden finger be invincible? Maybe the story of "DN" will collapse before readers get tired of this brain hole."

Shen Xin looked at Yan Fei in surprise, he didn't expect Yan Fei to consider this step.

What Yan Fei said is correct, the stronger the cheat, the more likely the story will collapse.

Why is "Invincible Essay" difficult to write? Because at the beginning of the work, the protagonist's level is max, and he doesn't need to defeat a strong opponent to get a sense of refreshment-the protagonist does not have a strong opponent in the work.

If such works want to attract readers, they often have to find another way.

A more tricky way is to limit the ability of the protagonist. Like in "Rurouni Kenshin", Himura Kenshin used to be an "executioner" and later vowed not to kill people again. the strength of the author.

The author can also choose to farm, such as "Becoming a Slime" type of work.

The handling of "One Punch Man" is also very good. One gives a lot of space to the supporting characters, and uses the "tragic" encounters of the supporting characters to whet the readers' appetite and pave the way for Saitama's appearance.

Therefore, Shen Xin also understood Yan Fei's thoughts, as long as she knew the opponent's name and appearance, she could use "DN" to directly eliminate the opponent. Therefore, in the eyes of ordinary people, the protagonist in "DN" has almost no opponents.

Those who hold "DN" have great advantages.

How to use "DN" to attract readers without letting it steal the protagonist's role is particularly critical.

"Actually, it's easy to deal with. Just limit the usage conditions of 'DN'." Shen Xin explained, "For example, when other characters appear in the public's view with pseudonyms, will 'DN' be useless?"

pseudonym! ?

Yan Fei nodded again and again. She thought too little just now and forgot the "false name".

"In addition, there are people who use 'DN'. No matter how powerful he is, he is not a god after all. Therefore, he will have shortcomings, such as arrogance, greed, jealousy, cruelty..."

"Stop, stop..." Yan Fei hurriedly called to stop.

If she didn't call to stop, Shen Xin would probably tell all the seven androids in "Smelting Steel".

"Give me a heartfelt message now, have you already thought of a solution? Whether it's the progress of the plot or the handling of cheats." Yan Fei waved her hand.

The reason why she was so careful was because she was afraid that Shen Xin would be careless and stumble on "DN".

This comic has a good idea, but it just doesn't feel stable.

But after being reminded by Shen Xin, Yan Fei also calmed down. The problem she mentioned before is not impossible to solve, but it will take a little time. Moreover, if even a niche comic like "Soul of Chess" can be developed, "DN" should also be accepted by readers.

Shen Xin nodded.

"My idea is that the story starts with 'DN', but when people die one after another, there will definitely be people who suspect and investigate, and this creates a rivalry."

"If the protagonist has 'DN', it's hard to have an opponent."

"Therefore, there are restrictions on the use of 'DN'. One is to know the opponent's real name, and the other is to know the opponent's appearance. If the opponent does not come out, or uses a pseudonym, even if there is a 'DN', there is no way."

"Wait, so, isn't this manga more about fighting wits?" Yan Fei regained her composure.

"That's right, I think so." Shen Xin agreed with Yan Fei's guess.

Yan Fei fell into a tangle again.

Combining evil comics and wits, the difficulty of creation is not small, and Mr. Shen has to take care of "Y's"... Is he really okay?

However, there is one thing to say, if it is a battle of wits, maybe it can really solve the problem of lack of stamina, and at the same time attract opponents.

The enemies faced by the villains in ordinary comics are the protagonist and the author. Then, in this comic, Mr. Shen can create conditions for the protagonist on the one hand, and on the other hand, stand on the opponent’s side, fighting wits with the protagonist. The meaning of fighting each other.

In this process, how Shen Xin balances her position is particularly critical.

Yan Fei had never seen this type of comics, and she was full of expectations for "DN".

"In this case... Mr. Shen, I will submit the name of the short story of "DN" to the magazine right now." Yan Fei sorted out the names, took the envelope from Shen Xin, and put the name in it.

"Please, Sister Yan." Shen Xin chuckled lightly.

"Why are you being polite to me?" Yan Fei waved her hand, didn't bother to drink water, took her name, and quickly went downstairs.

Yan Fei still can't see the future direction of "DN".

She just knew that the idea of ​​this comic was very novel, and the serialized comics using this brain hole also made it possible to extend the plot after the introduction of Zhidou.

Let's not talk about the performance of serial comics, now that there is a direction, the follow-up plot can be slowly polished.

Yan Fei took a taxi and returned to the magazine in one breath. In her haste, she almost forgot to pay for the taxi.

Hurriedly entering the editorial office, Yan Fei went straight to Hu Ke and put the envelope in front of him.

After taking charge of Shen Xin's new work, Yan Fei was also transferred to Hu Ke's group.

Hu Ke looked at Yan Fei in surprise, not knowing why.

"This is the title of a short story in Teacher Shen's new book." Yan Fei explained.

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