Chapter 681 Name and Length

After Yan Fei left the editorial office, she took a taxi to Shen Xin's studio.

Five assistants on the first floor are working together to draw "Y's", while on the second floor, Wang Wenhong and Xi Muhan are sitting on the sofa, carefully flipping through the name.

"What's the matter? Name came out?" Yan Fei gasped and went up to the second floor, looking very nervous.

"Yes." Xi Muhan got up, and handed the three-character name in his hand to Yan Fei, "Sister Yan, here you are."

Yan Fei nodded, took the name, and sat on the sofa.

Name has a total of three chapters, at least 80 pages, and it feels very thick.

"Mr. Shen, your time to serialize name is longer than expected." Yan Fei smiled.

Shen Xin laughed dryly, "I've encountered some trouble."

The origin of the story of "DN" is District 11. Shen Xin encountered some problems when modifying the background.

For example, when investigating the month, the FBI in the United States was involved. This kind of thing will not happen in Huaxia.

Therefore, Shen Xin can only invent an international organization to replace the FBI.

Other backgrounds, such as the police system, have also been simplified, and some details have also been adjusted.

Shen Xin didn't pay attention to these issues before drawing the name of the comic strip. After starting to write, Shen Xin realized that these factors were ignored.

Other types of comics don't matter, but "DN" is a battle of wits, and Shen Xin tries to make the whole comic logical.

"Is it difficult?" Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin shook her head, "That's not true, I've already thought of a countermeasure, and the next step is to search for information."

Seeing that Shen Xin's expression was normal, Yan Fei was slightly relieved, and her eyes fell on the name in her hand.

The short story of "DN" has a relatively simple story structure, but such a simple structure will definitely not work in the long-form serialization.

The first chapter is called "boring", but the story is not boring at all.

Yan Fei finished the first chapter in one breath,

Effortless.

In the first episode, the protagonist Ah Yue (Yeshenyue) accidentally picked up a notebook and used the note to punish the guilty.

The first chapter of the story involves two places, one is the world of death, and the other is the world of human beings.

This story mainly uses the narrative method. First, Ah Yue picked up the notes, and then five days later, Death God Ruk found Ah Yue, and Ah Yue began to recall the past five days. He used the notes to punish evil and promote good.

Within a week, 52 people were known to have died, all from cardiac palsies, which got the CPO concerned.

In the last frame of this episode, a person in light-colored clothes is sitting on the floor, looking at the display screen on the floor, showing his great interest in this matter: "No matter how great I am, this kind of Things have to be resorted to by the police.”

"Did the opponent come out in the first episode?" Yan Fei was surprised, "Isn't it too fast to get to the point?"

Obviously, this is a brain-hole comic with "note" as the golden finger.

In the short stories, Wang Jing's performance is relatively restrained, but Ah Yue has gone to another extreme.

Generally speaking, the author uses golden fingers to create a "cool" feeling, so as to make readers feel sympathetic. In subsequent creations, use this "cool" point to attract readers as much as possible. Even if an opponent needs to appear, it is when readers get bored with cheating and their grades start to decline.

However, "DN" is different. Ah Yue's strength shown by using the golden finger of note is only reflected in the memories of Ah Yue and Ru Ke. Immediately afterwards, international organizations were brought out, and Ah Yue also had an opponent.

From the first chapter, it can be basically judged that the "cool" point of this comic is not how Ah Yue uses notes, but how to fight wits and courage with this light-colored person.

Next, is the second chapter "L", where name portrays the world's number one detective from the side. At the same time, L and Yue finally had their first fight.

L used a death row prisoner to provoke Ah Yue, and deduced that Ah Yue was in Hongchuan, China.

The first confrontation between the two, L took the initiative.

The third chapter "Family" points out Yue's identity. Ye Yilang (Zongichiro), the person in charge of this case, turned out to be Yue's father, and Yue also got the investigation information from his father, and L passed A Yue changed the rules of the crime, and speculated that he could know the police's intelligence...

Yan Fei finished the three chapters in one go, her mind was in a mess and she couldn't speak.

"How is it, Sister Yan?" Shen Xin looked at Yan Fei.

"Ah?" Yan Fei regained her composure, and looked at Shen Xin in surprise, "The rhythm is fast, too fast——wait, I want to ask, is this person named 'L' just an insignificant chess piece, or very important role."

Yan Fei stared at Shen Xin, she hoped it was the first answer.

"L is a very important person...you can regard him as another protagonist." Shen Xin said seriously.

Yan Fei gave a "tsk", frowned, looked at the name in her hand, and shook her head slightly.

"It's too fast... If you do this, it is equivalent to limiting the length of this comic to death. Such a good idea, but it quickly leads to an opponent who is evenly matched with Ah Yue, and instantly speeds up the pace of the story. If it is ordinary In the comics, the encounter between Ruke and Ah Yue, and Ah Yue's use of notes, these two parts alone can draw more than a dozen chapters. The current name is a waste of these settings."

"Why prolong the plot?" Shen Xin asked back.

"Eh?" Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin in surprise, "Of course it's for better grades..."

"I understand what you mean, Sister Yan." Shen Xin nodded, "The longer the comic, the easier it is to attract readers. The sales of the work are also better."

On the one hand, the magazine is reluctant to end the cash cow, and on the other hand, no author can guarantee that his next work will achieve better results than the previous one.

"So, you should take advantage of your current popularity to lengthen the length of "DN"..." Yan Fei glanced again, and Wang Wenhong complained, "You have served as the editor in charge, and you know the importance of length to the work, so you don't need it. Can you persuade Teacher Shen?"

"Leaving aside the length... What do you think of the plot, storyboard, and rhythm of the first three episodes of "DN"?" Wang Wenhong asked rhetorically.

Yan Fei bit her lip, her eyes fixed on the name in her hand, "It's great. Even though it's just a draft, it already makes me very excited."

"Is it the ceiling of evil comics?" Wang Wenhong continued to ask.

"Forget it!" Yan Fei nodded without thinking.

"In all fairness, do you think you can reach the ceiling if you say it?" Wang Wenhong asked again.

Yan Fei shook her head, then looked at Shen Xin, "I understand. You also want to make "DN" a classic."

Shen Xin nodded, "I want to draw an evil manga that is as wonderful as "Smelting Steel"."

In order to let "DN" end at the perfect time, he even deleted the pages of Nia and Milo.

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