Chapter Five Hundred and Thirtieth Praise and Criticism 1
Generally speaking, the highlight of a fighting comic should be mentioned in the first chapter.
For example, at the beginning of the story of "Pirate", the "Rubber Fruit" was introduced, and "Reaper" and "Xu" appeared in the first episode of "Reaper".
Therefore, generally speaking, the first chapter of a long-form series is a complete story, and secondly, in this story, the selling point of the comic must be reflected.
The same goes for Age of the Gods.
After the male protagonist woke up, he found himself in the stables with a bandage around his neck. , stepping staggeringly, came out from the stables, surrounded by a large yard, and a girl—the one who shot the vampire—appeared in front of the protagonist, she was in the same school as the protagonist, and a student A proud girl like a princess.
A female character with arrogant attributes is a frequent visitor in comics.
However, Wang Yunze would design such a character... Shen Xin really did not expect it. &1t;i>&1t;/i>
Looking further down, the meaning of "Gods" gradually became clear.
A person with a "spirit" can summon a suitable "god" and fight accordingly. Ordinary people cannot see "God", and anyone who can see "God" has a "spirit".
This kind of person is one in a million, but if they are not trained or their will is not strong enough, it is easy for some "gods" to take advantage of their loopholes and then "degenerate". "Degenerate" is irreversible, therefore, the ultimate fate of all degenerate people is death.
The "god" possessed by the president is an angel.
After seeing the introduction of combat power, Shen Xin felt a bit like "Shaman King", but "Shaman King" did not have the concept of "degeneration".
As for the degenerate girl, she has already been "handled" by the president.
At the end of the story, in the darkness, someone began to have feelings for the protagonist again. &1t;i>&1t;/i>
The plot ends here.
After Shen Xin read it all in one breath, she rolled her eyes and shook her head again.
"Brother Xin, do you feel bad?" Xi Muhan asked in a low voice.
"No." Shen Xin shook her head, "This setting is not bad. If there are no accidents, the setting will be a plus for this comic."
"However, the plot of the story is a bit weak." Xi Muhan said.
If she had been writing the story, it probably wouldn't have been the case.
"However, it's not incomprehensible." Shen Xin's words made Xi Muhan feel curious again.
"Huh?" Xi Muhan looked puzzled.
"If a comic is based on setting, it is impossible to use a complicated plot at the beginning, because the story needs to explain the setting. If the plot is too complicated, the story will appear too bloated, and it will be difficult for readers to understand the outline of the story. Like "Smelting Steel", it was dull for a long time, and it didn't become exciting until the end of last year." &1t;i>&1t;/i>
Xi Muhan nodded, this is true.
In fact, the plot of "Smelting Steel" is very straightforward, that is, the Elric brothers are looking for a way to restore their bodies. At first they searched for the "Sage's Stone", but later the two brothers knew the truth about the "Sage's Stone", so they had to choose other methods.
In this process, the background of the whole story is slowly revealed.
"'Age of the Gods' may not be unpopular with readers." Shen Xin said.
"Why?"
"Because, reading this comic is almost not difficult." Shen Xin explained.
Xi Muhan frowned slightly, and quickly turned to the last page to check the readers' comments.
As evidenced by the comments, readers have had mixed reviews of the manga.
"Ah... what, it made me look forward to it so much." &1t;i>&1t;/i>
"That's right... I thought it was a particularly good manga, and the plot is too straightforward, right? It's simply incomparable with "Smelting Steel"."
"What's wrong with this, the story is simple, I like it better."
"This kind of cartoon, at most, is when you go to the toilet,
Just flip through. "
Seeing these messages, Xi Muhan was overjoyed.
"Brother Xin, readers seem to be very dissatisfied with "Age of the Gods"."
"There are also people who are dissatisfied with "Steel Refining", so what does that mean?" Shen Xin asked back.
"Brother Xin, why are you talking to him?" Xi Muhan said dissatisfied.
Shen Xin smiled wryly, "It's not that I'm looking at him, just like what these readers commented, if it's not free, they might not read it, but this manga is completely free. So, just listen to what they say, and shout out over and over again. Don’t watch it, call Zhenxiang over and over again, I’ve seen this kind of thing a lot. What’s more, even people are flawed, so why insist on the work?” &1t;i>&1t;/i>
Xi Muhan opened his mouth slightly, but couldn't speak.
Especially Shen Xin's last sentence, she agrees with it very much - all people have flaws, so the works created by people will naturally have flaws.
"Brother Xin, I realize that what you say needs to be savored carefully."
"Talk from experience." Shen Xin rubbed her nose, "Look, "Age of the Gods" is more popular than "Smelting Steel"."
"Huh? So fast? Then do we still have a chance?" Xi Muhan looked nervous.
"Readers can only buy the latest issue of "comicfuture" during the day, and the outcome hasn't started yet?" Shen Xin stretched her muscles, "I hope "Smelting Steel" can surpass "Age of the Gods."
...
Although it was released in the early morning, there are not a few readers who watch the comics. &1t;i>&1t;/i>
Just half an hour after the new book was released, there was already a heated discussion on the Internet.
Some people are disappointed, some people are happy.
The debate between the two factions has made the popularity of comics continue to rise.
Both Weibo and Duoman.com have become "battlefields", each trying to convince the other and doing everything they can.
"The first chapter has something novel, but it also has something clichéd. In short, I don't like it too much."
"I originally thought 'Age of the Gods' was a very powerful work, but now it seems that I am a little disappointed."
"That's right, the story takes place in modern times, without the sense of mystery of 'God'."
Some people hate it, and naturally some people like it.
"Aren't you too harsh? Are you so demanding? Teacher Wang just set the background of the story in the current world to make it easier for readers to accept the story. Besides, is the plot really not good enough? The girl who thought she would be bullied, suddenly Killed the person who wanted to have unreasonable thoughts about her. The protagonist mustered up his courage, but was attacked by the girl again, so as to draw out the 'god'." &1t;i>&1t;/i>
"That's right. In addition, the storyboarding and drawing skills of comics are far superior to other cartoonists."
"There is no cartoonist in China with more superb drawing skills than Mr. Wang."
"Teacher Shen..."
"Both of them, 50-50, right?"
"God tmd 50-50! It's obvious that Mr. Shen is better."
"That's because Mr. Wang didn't take it seriously. The 'No. 1 man in domestic comics' is still Mr. Wang, which is recognized by everyone."
"Don't... If you say it, don't take me, I don't..."
The quarrels between the two factions are endless, and the popularity of "Age of the Gods" continues to rise.
Yuan Zhe persisted until four o'clock, and did not catch his breath until "Age of the Gods" turned against "Steel Refining" with 300,000 popularity points.
Qian Sheng came over and said softly, "Can you rest for a while?"
Yuan Zhe nodded, "When will the second chapter be released?"
"10 in the morning. "Comicfuture" is on sale during the day. From this point of view, it can suppress the signs of "Smelting Steel"." Qian Sheng explained.
"This is the best. "Age of the Gods" will be serialized three episodes on the first day. I don't believe it, and "Smelting Steel" might not work."
"It should be possible. I just took a look at the Penguin, and Mr. Tong is still online—he should also be waiting for the performance of "Age of the Gods." Qian Sheng said.
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