Chapter 448 Adjustment

The plot of Glider in "Forged Steel" is not too short, especially, after the serialization of "Eye of the King", Glider and Bradley officially confronted each other, which surprised readers.

To other androids, Greed's identity is akin to a traitor.

Therefore, the duel between artificial humans has something to watch - in fact, everyone also wants to know the ultimate fate of Glider - although Glider is more serious to readers than other artificial humans.

Soon, the words "The Mystery of Truth in the Armor" were published, Bradley called in the army, and began to strangle Greed and the Synthetic Beasts, but ironically, among the Synthetic Beasts, there were also Some people participated in the "Ishwar Rebellion" 13 years ago, and were seriously injured as a result. They were finally used as test subjects for synthetic beast experiments. After escaping, they met Greed and found a safe place.

What is right and what is wrong becomes blurred again at this moment. Many readers are arguing endlessly about this, but Shen Xin is happy to see this kind of situation.

Readers are arguing over the characters or the plot in the comic, which shows that they have seen different meanings from this comic. For the work, this incident is a good thing.

In addition, Su Han finally returned to Hongchuan from Yanjing. Before he had time to rest, he immediately found Wang Wenhong and asked him to take him to find Shen Xin and Xi Muhan.

Shen Xin didn't know how long she hadn't seen Su Han, but there was still three or four years.

Compared to that time, Su Han looks more mature. As for charm—that's it, although her appearance is indeed a plus, but this woman has a dull face most of the time, which is really difficult. attract people.

Su Han walked around the second floor and made a request, since there are so many vacant rooms, then she and Xi Muhan should work in the room - quietly.

Shen Xin has to be outside because she needs to contact her assistant, but the novel authors don't have any estimates in this regard. They only care about whether there is a quiet space so that they can create with peace of mind.

"no problem."

Shen Xin agrees with the two people's suggestions. In fact, he also believes that novel authors should have a quiet studio.

The two selected a corner room. Wang Wenhong, Shen Xin and their assistants helped them move the tables and chairs. Before Su Han "kicked out" the room, Shen Xin solemnly thanked Su Han.

"I am also very happy to be able to participate in the production of such an animation. I feel that this animation, as well as other parts of "Smelting Steel", will definitely leave a mark in the animation history of China, and even the animation history of District 11." own chapter."

Whether it's Wang Yunze, Su Han, or Ye Hexu, remuneration is not what they value most. What they care more about is whether they can leave some works to prove their existence.

However, everyone chooses a different path.

After Su Han joined, Shen Xin's role was changed to a person who provided background settings, read the outline, and made suggestions. He can ask whether he needs a certain plot, but in terms of creation, Su Han forbids Shen Xin to help.

In her words, this is the pride of the author.

"How is it? Can you breathe a sigh of relief now?" Wang Wenhong, who was also kicked out of the room, was in a good mood. The creation of the script was on the right track, and he could also let go of the burden in his heart.

"It's okay. But you, I'm afraid the pressure is not small, right?"

"That's right. The magazine is under a lot of pressure. Next week... In fact, in just two or three days, the last chapter of "Hunting Abyss" will be published, and in a week, Duoman.com will open its website. Teacher Wang Yunze is about to leave "Hunting Abyss" ComicFuture, so, no matter how you look at it, the life of the magazine is not easy. For this reason, the board of directors has lowered the sales forecast of the magazine. By the end of this year, if "ComicFuture" can maintain 4 million copies, it will be a victory."

Internal and external troubles, even the magazine felt the pressure and had to make strategic adjustments.

Shen Xin is also powerless, he is just an author, he doesn't know much about operations, and he doesn't want to think about these things,

I just want to paint "Smelting Steel".

Since Xi Muhan and Su Han have a studio, they rarely walk around alone. Shen Xin also felt a little relieved, and a smile finally appeared on Xi Muhan's face.

On the third day after Su Han came over, Xi Muhan handed Xi Gang into Shen Xin's hands.

This time the detailed outline has become nine and a half episodes, but the plot has become more and more compact.

The story begins with the legend of the "Western Sage", which leads to alchemy and Zhang Mei. It takes one episode to introduce the Zhang family, and at the end of the first episode, Yao Lin is introduced.

The story adopts the "third episode effect" mentioned by Shen Xin. In the third episode of the story, a princess who has a good relationship with Yao Lin is killed by a hostile prince because of a trivial matter.

When Zhang Mei learned of this incident, she felt sad for the death of the rabbit, while Yao Lin vowed to avenge the princess. At this moment, a message came from the palace that the emperor was critically ill.

As a result, the princes calculated each other, on the one hand they wanted to stop other princes who were also princes, on the other hand, without exception, their eyes were aimed at the throne...

"Why is there half an episode?" Shen Xin was puzzled.

"This half-episode still needs to compress the plot. Generally speaking, the story will be more compact." Xi Muhan said.

"That's it." Shen Xin nodded slightly.

"Brother, what do you think of the script this time?"

"How?" Shen Xin carefully read the script again, "I think it will be more in line with the theme if we remove part of the infighting between the princes and emphasize alchemy and the Philosopher's Stone."

"I thought so too, but Sister Su Han felt that this kind of plot arrangement would make the story more compact." Xi Muhan explained.

"If this is an independent work, Mr. Su's words are correct, but this is an extended work of "Smelting Steel" after all, and it must be based on the rhythm of "Smelting Steel". "The works are full of battles, rather, its 'uncovering' process is even more fascinating." Shen Xin expressed her own understanding.

"it is as expected."

Xi Muhan didn't feel depressed, but was delighted that he and Shen Xin had the same views.

"When are you going to send a detailed outline to Supervisor Zhuang Si?" Shen Xin asked back.

"Sister Su Han said, don't let the Orochi people underestimate us, this time we have to pass it once." Xi Muhan said seriously.

"Is that so." Shen Xin was stunned for a moment, and had to say that Su Han's strong personality played an unexpected role at this moment.

Xi Muhan returned to the studio with the detailed outline, and conveyed Shen Xin's suggestion to Su Han, and the two continued to devote themselves to writing the detailed outline.

Shen Xin was thinking about another thing - now that September 1st is getting closer, I wonder if Tamagawa Haruka is ready?

1 second to remember Aishang Novel Network:. Mobile version reading website: