Chapter 447 Re-Serialization

Xi Muhan wanted to cooperate with Su Han, but failed for the time being.

Su Han hoped to get involved. After all, "Steel Refining" had already started to gain traction in China, and it was also very popular in District 11. In addition, Shoji Uno was also well-known in the industry. At the same time, Shen Xin and Xi Muhan will also participate in it. Various factors made Su Han feel that if he had the opportunity to write a script for this comic, it would be a good experience.

However, she is now promoting a new book, and it will take half a month after this circle.

That is to say, within this half month, she has no way to return to Hongchuan.

There is no hope for Su Han to join for the time being, and Shen Xin and Xi Muhan did not feel discouraged. In fact, the reason why Xi Muhan wanted to ask Su Han for help was mainly in the creation of novels and scripts.

If the same detailed outline is handed over to different authors, the novels written will definitely be different.

This difference is not only reflected in the choice of words and sentences, but also in the control of the rhythm of the story.

Xi Muhan used to write in an ancient style, with delicate writing style, and more emphasis on the exudation of emotions from the inside out. Unknowingly, the emotions of the characters have been integrated.

But Su Han is good at reasoning, and puts more emphasis on the suspense of the story. Sometimes, in order to achieve unexpected results, he doesn't even emphasize logic too much. As a result, the rhythm of Su Han's novels is faster than that of Xi Muhan.

In particular, recently, Su Han has also tried to change her style, wanting to make her writing style more diverse. In fact, her latest love novel is already much better than before.

At the same time, in terms of creative experience, Su Han has more experience than Xi Muhan, so the problem is not too big.

Since it was still early in September, Shen Xin was not in a hurry, and Xi Muhan took advantage of this time to continue revising the detailed outline, trying to complete the complete detailed outline before Su Han came.

This time, Xi Muhan also began to try to determine the big rhythm of the story according to the length of a single episode, for example, the first episode introduces the background, the second episode lays the groundwork, and the third episode has a magical turning point...

Mark the key points of each episode, put appropriate content in it, redistribute the plot, and delete redundant details.

The outline of the original 11 episodes was cut down by one episode.

At the same time, Shen Xin also put forward her own opinion. Although the work has two protagonists, unlike "Smelting Steel", Zhang Mei and Yao Lin have relatively independent story lines, so when creating, only one character can be focused on .

"It's best to start with Zhang Mei. You can use Zhang Mei to lead to alchemy. However, the whole story should focus on Yao Lin. After all, Yao Lin also has Lord Fu and Lan Fang under his command, so the difficulty of creation is slightly lower. There’s nothing left to say.”

Xi Muhan nodded.

The things that happened between the three people must be more than one person, not to mention that Yao Lin, as the prince, has a closer relationship with the emperor.

Xi Muhan has already thought about these things.

"By the way, there are some details that you also need to know, such as Xiaomei—the panda with a small size,

Sometimes it synchronizes with Zhang Mei's movements. "

"Yeah." Xi Muhan carefully wrote it down in the notepad.

"Also, Lan Fang can smell artificial humans."

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, then looked up at Shen Xin, "Is she a 'dog'?"

"..."

"Steel Refining" was serialized again after a two-week hiatus, and "King's Eye" was finally published.

Before this story, Edward had to go to Central City because he had to go through the national alchemist qualification examination.

After meeting Bradley (President), Edward inadvertently mentions his mentor, Izumi.

Bradley wanted to invite Izmi to be the national alchemist, so he went to Dabris. At the same time, Al was also caught by Greed. In order to rescue Al, Izmi kicked Greed away. Germany's door.

Izumi initially tried to rescue Al back, but Al stopped her.

"Please let my brother come here... Glid taught us how to make humans, and my brother taught him how to refine souls. This opportunity is rare..."

Under Al's strong request, Izumi had to return home first.

Edward led Bradley to Dabris. During the conversation, Bradley accidentally learned about Glider.

On the one hand, Edward fights Glider in order to save Al, but Bradley mobilizes the army to besiege Glider.

"The Eye of the King" is about the duel between Glider and Bradley.

On the last page, Bradley's long sword pierced Greed's throat, and at the same time his blindfold fell off, and a tattoo of a snake appeared in the pupil of his eye.

This scene took the readers by surprise.

"Bradley is not human!"

"He is the person with the highest authority in this country...I didn't expect him to be an artificial human."

"I'm wondering now, will Edward and the others fight against Bradley?"

"Can't beat it? Bradley's swordsmanship is super strong, and Edward's physical skills, it is impossible to beat Bradley."

"I'm really looking forward to the next plot... I can't guess it."

This remark aroused a good response among the readers, and "Steel Refining" also defeated "The Legend of the Dragon King" in the small book, and came to the third place.

Shang Haozhi is quite satisfied with the performance of "Steel Refining", and he has also read the follow-up nearly 20 episodes of name, and it is easier to control the trend of the entire comic. From the content he has read, the setting and The layout has already surpassed the average level of "The Legend of the Dragon King". What is slightly lacking is the fighting.

Even though there are already some fighting scenes in the book, it is still a little not passionate enough for a kingly work, and even the top work of the magazine.

Even so, he still feels that "Forged Steel" has the potential to become a new pillar of "Comic Future" - the one that replaces "The Legend of the Dragon King".

Due to the addition of "King of Rock and Roll" and the revival of "Smelting Steel", the sales of "Comic Future" finally stopped falling.

At the same time, the online version of comics has made good profits, although it is far from being comparable to "Comic Future", or even the sales of 50 comics a week. Not a tenth of Comic Future's, but it's another paycheck for veteran cartoonists -- especially ones already struggling financially.

"By the way, how is Teacher Shen doing recently?" Shang Haozhi looked up at the report sent by the sales department and asked Shen Xin.

"The creation of "Steel Refining" is normal, but Mr. Shen put part of his energy on the script." Wang Wenhong said.

Shang Haozhi frowned, "Please pay attention to his body... What did Teacher Su say?"

"She's still in Yanjing, and there are still a few bookstores to sign and sell books. It will take five or six days at the earliest. She has signed contracts with these bookstores, so there is no way."

"En." Shang Haozhi nodded slightly, and let out a breath of patience.

Su Han is quite famous in the bestseller world, and he has no way to force him to do so. He can only hope that Su Han will return to Hongchuan as soon as possible.