Chapter 1033 Revised

Shen Xin was not at all surprised that Xi Muhan and Lu Ning's new work was brought back for revision.

Can "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds" be serialized?

The level is certainly enough.

Xi Muhan has already shown a strong creative ability in "Ding Shi", and Lu Ning's creative level is far different from before.

Therefore, there is no reason why the comics created by the two people should not be serialized.

The most fundamental reason why Hooker is asking the two to readjust the plot is that they have different requirements for the works—the magazine hopes that the new works of the two will become new pillars, rather than works that are hovering at the waist.

Xi Muhan and Lu Ning modified it again according to Hu Ke's suggestion. Now that Lu Ning also uses a digital screen, it is relatively convenient to modify.

As for the title of the book, the two of them thought for a long time, but they couldn't think of a suitable name.

After all, it is still difficult to express the theme of the story with a small number of words.

In Shen Xin's studio, the assistants left one after another, and Xi Muhan and Lu Ning also discussed the progress of the manga with Wu Xiaoli. Later, Yan Fei and Wang Wenhong also participated in the discussion, and the discussion was very enjoyable.

After turning off the digital screen and computer, Shen Xin came out of the office with a big yawn and saw five people still discussing in Lu Ning's studio, so she knocked on the door lightly.

Seeing Shen Xin, Lu Ning immediately stood up, and the other four consciously gave way a little bit.

"What are you doing?"

"Come up with a name. Team leader Hook said that "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds" is too long, so it's better to compress it." Wu Xiaoli explained.

"I think the name is quite good, and it directly tells the selling point." Shen Xin laughed.

Naming a book is a very delicate matter, and the same is true for online novels. It is best to have a selling point. For example, system texts all contain "xx system". This is because readers may find this book when they search for the popular word "system". Similarly, there are "XX God of War" and "XX God Emperor" , "The XX of Rebirth" book is also for this reason.

However, the names of some comics are also guessed, such as "mix" and "H2" by Anda Chong, "Five Star Story" by Nagano Mamoru, etc. If you don't read the comics, you will never guess the content of the comics, even the subject matter. It would be hard to imagine.

For "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds", Shen Xin didn't think there was any big problem.

"Really? Then... change it or not?" Xi Muhan hesitated.

"Looking at what Editor Wu means, I'm not very good at this either." Shen Xin picked it up, looked it over quickly, and raised her brows slightly.

"Teacher, is there anything wrong?" Lu Ning saw Shen Xin's comments on the revision, and asked quickly.

"No... I just think the previous one was pretty good, but after the modification, it lacks my own characteristics." Shen Xin felt a little regretful, "The plot after the first chapter has some routines."

Wang Wenhong and Yan Fei looked at each other with a tacit understanding.

So do they.

"Obviously, the first chapter is more suitable for evil manga." Shen Xin added.

"However, creating evil manga... there will be a limit to the length." Xi Muhan struggled.

"It depends on your pursuit. If you want to create a manga with high reputation, focus on the first chapter. If you want to draw a long manga, focus on the later plot. But, I think, if you focus on Drawing the follow-up story... Whether the heroine travels through time or not is not critical, is it?"

"The following plot is related to time travel." Xi Muhan added.

Shen Xin didn't know whether to laugh or cry, "Maybe, but readers don't know the relationship between the two. Unless you want to imitate "Stones;Gate" and be consistent from beginning to end. If you want to use time travel as a selling point, I... personally don't like it. "

In many cases, the creator will set a plot, and this plot has a lot to do with the follow-up, but readers don't buy it, thinking that the plot is redundant, which is actually the case.

Because readers don't know the creator's outline, they can only see what the creator wants them to see,

And the creator can't spoil it, so both parties are very uncomfortable.

Take this new manga as an example, judging from the first three chapters, the relationship between the first chapter and the second and third chapters is not too big, which is what makes Shen Xin feel the most pity, because the first chapter has the potential to become a pillar , and may even become another cult comic classic.

The first episode of "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds" reminded Shen Xin of "another". The atmosphere was very close. The two could draw a deciphered comic, but the decision was in Xi Muhan's hands, and Shen Xin didn't think too much about it. Put pressure on her.

The others also looked at Xi Muhan who was in deep thought, waiting for her decision.

However, how to choose the direction of the story has never been a simple matter, and sometimes it may even make the performance of the work turn from prosperity to decline.

On this day, Xi Muhan did not give a result, and it was not until later in the second day that she gathered everyone together and expressed her own thoughts-to dismantle "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds".

How to dismantle it?

This question popped up in everyone's mind.

"It is to separate the first chapter from the subsequent plot. From the original first chapter, a new comic is extended, focusing on adventure and decryption. The latter content is redesigned to focus on love, adventure, and add some myths or Monster elements. However, in this way, I may have to wait for a while to reorganize the work. As for the name of the new work, it is still called "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds."

Xi Muhan apologized to Lu Ning and Wu Xiaoli.

Shen Xin nodded, he understood Xi Muhan's idea, which is to divide this comic into two completely unrelated works.

In this case, Shen Xin is still looking forward to the first story. In Shen Xin's view, it does have the potential to become a pillar, even surpassing other serial comics in "ComicFuture". Of course, the premise is that "" is excluded.

After Hu Ke learned of Xi Muhan's decision, he didn't say a word for a long time.

Unexpectedly, his words delayed the serialization date of a new work by a month.

When the time entered December, the schools that were shortlisted for the national competition were determined one by one. Fang Man also handed over the materials of the major universities to Yan Fei, who then sorted it out and handed it over to Shen Xin to draw the character design.

At the same time, the full-color version of "" was finally confirmed to be produced. After Yu Chen and Shen Xin agreed, it was confirmed that the full-color version would be limited to 100,000 copies, and the unit price was set at 100 yuan.

The full-color version is just icing on the cake, and the real sale of "" is the regular version of the booklet.

Of course, these contents are just discussions between Yu Chen and Shen Xin in private. On all major platforms, Yu Chen and the magazine of "ComicFuture" just said one thing--the full-color version of "" will be released next year. Available half a year.

This news is indeed great news for "" fans. Many people talked about the full-color version of the manga on the forum, and they are gearing up to buy a copy.

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