Chapter 100032 New Work

After Lu Ning drew "Steins;Gate" by himself, the storyboard has been significantly improved compared to before, and the character design given is also more proficient, and even vaguely has the shadow of "Steins;Gate", This shows that Lu Ning has gradually developed her own style.

The name of the manga is relatively long, it is called "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds". From the name, it can be seen that this manga is different from other traditional manga, and it takes girls as the first perspective.

Such works are very rare, because there are special magazines with girls as the first perspective. Usually, the readers of this kind of comics are mostly girls-oriented comics, and magazines are also called girls' magazines, such as "Girls' Century".

This kind of work has more delicate emotions, and because it is a manga for girls, there are more handsome guys.

But "ComicFuture" is a juvenile manga, and most of its readers are boys. Even if there are female cartoonists serializing it, most of the stories are described from the perspective of boys.

Like "The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds", the title of the book shows that the perspective is a girl. Whether this kind of comics can attract readers is really hard to say.

Hook took out the essential oil and wiped his temples.

You must concentrate on this comic, otherwise, if you make a wrong judgment, it will be bad for the two teachers and the magazine.

"I said... Xiaoli..." Hu Ke put away the essential oil and looked at Wu Xiaoli.

"Um?"

"I want to ask you something...well, have you seen this?"

Hook also knew that the answer was "yes", but he was still worried.

"Team leader, this was finally determined after two weeks of deliberation with Mr. Xi Muhan." Wu Xiaoli said patiently.

"You know that "ComicFuture" is a juvenile manga?" Hook asked again.

"Of course I know." Wu Xiaoli nodded.

"That's good……"

After hearing the "yes" answer, Hook took a deep breath, and his eyes fell on the top again.

Now that Wu Xiaoli knows this, he can rest assured to read on.

"The Girl Who Traveled Through Parallel Worlds" tells the story of a girl named "An Jie", who has always had a crush on Wang He, a male student in the same class, but being introverted, she has never dared to confess her love to Wang He.

During a class trip, An Jie met Wang He on the beach, and the two looked at each other and smiled.

Suddenly, a big wave rose by the sea, and before An Jie could run away in the future, she and Wang He got involved in the big wave.

The sudden change made Hook's scalp tingle and he had goose bumps on his body.

This turning point came too fast. It's almost a surprise.

The heroine died suddenly in the first episode? What is this unfolding of God?

Wait, the title is "The Girl Who Travels Through Parallel Worlds"... The heroine shouldn't be time-traveling, right?

Hook turned to the next page again, and sure enough, An Jie opened her eyes. She was lying on the bed, and the alarm clock beside the table showed 6:30.

It turned out to be a dream.

An Jie quickly dressed, washed and ate, and took the subway to the school. During the preview, her eyes shifted to Wang He, but there were other people sitting in Wang He's seat.

Until the end of the first class, Wang He still didn't come.

"I just found out that classmate Wang He's seat...was changed by the teacher." An Jie was embarrassed to directly ask why Wang He didn't come, so she could only ask her deskmate from other aspects.

The deskmate turned her head in surprise, looked at An Jie, touched An Jie's forehead with her hand, "Do you have a fever?"

"What's wrong?"

"Wang He is dead...he passed away a year ago..."

After reading this, Hook's body was covered with goose bumps.

It seems that the plot is flat, but the direction of the plot is somewhat unexpected.

This comic... has the meaning of some evil comics.

Hook held his breath again and continued to look down.

An Jie thought that the tablemate was joking, and quickly asked about the recent group activities, but found that the tablemate denied all of them.

An Jie was not reconciled, after returning home at night,

I found the class photos, and there was no Wang He in the photos.

Obviously... there is Wang He.

An Jie remembered it very clearly. She had seen this class photo many times, and she even remembered Wang He's smile clearly.

Just when she was full of doubts, something suddenly hit the window. She tiptoedly opened the window, and suddenly a person curled up and stepped on the window sill, it was Wang He...

After reading the first episode, Hooker enjoyed the countless reversals.

Then, the second and third chapters are to advance the story. An Jie has indeed traveled through time, because she can see things that ordinary people can't see, goblins. And from this, the plot unfolded.

"How is it? Team leader." Wu Xiaoli asked.

"Yes, the quality of the first episode is the highest, and the plot of the next two episodes is stable, unfolding the world view, in line with the rhythm of comics..."

Wu Xiaoli nodded again and again, "I think so too."

"But there is one thing... no, I have to say something, I think it's a little unsmooth." Hook hesitated.

"Huh? Is there?"

"It's not a big deal, I just feel that the first chapter has too many reversals. If this is a manga of evil ways, then this opening chapter is extremely exciting, and it can even surpass all manga except "", but obviously, This is not an evil manga, the manga introduces monsters, but the monsters are not directly related to Wang He's death... In fact, when a person dies, the atmosphere of the story becomes serious and depressing... Is it possible to use the method of transferring to another school? Replace it with an excuse like this, otherwise, the tone of the story is too dark.

"Of course, I'm not saying that there can't be a dark tone, but that the tone is laid out in the first episode, which doesn't match the atmosphere of the second and third episodes, and it's easy for readers to feel 'fooled'. Personal advice , to reduce the dark tone of the first chapter a little."

Wu Xiaoli frowned, thinking carefully, and the whole atmosphere of the story, I have to say that what Hook said was also reasonable, the atmosphere of the first episode seemed too heavy compared to the following two episodes.

At that time, I just wanted to quickly attract readers, but I forgot that this comic is not an evil comic.

Better to revise it again.

Wu Xiaoli wrote this down in her notes, and then asked: "Team leader, what are the shortcomings?"

"Other aspects are fine. The overall quality is very high, making people want to read on. However, it is quite difficult to observe the world from the perspective of girls. I hope that the two teachers can create a wonderful work, and then The title...is it too long? We are not editors of light novels, so there is no need for such a long name?"

"ah?"

Hearing Hook's comment, Wu Xiaoli felt black lines all over her head. She felt that this was the title of the book that best suited the theme.

change name? What should it be called?

Wu Xiaoli scratched her head, it seemed that she could only discuss it with Xi Muhan.

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