Chapter 1503: The Red Flag That Doesn't Fall
The so-called breaking point is like Wang Cheng's sentence in "Heroes and Daughters", "For victory, fire at me!", or the protagonist in "***" held up the explosive bag and shouted "For the new China, go forward!", Or the scene where Sun Desheng, who has only one arm left, charges at the devil alone, which can ignite the passion of the audience.
These scenes can be fictitious, because literary and artistic works are still somewhat different from reality. Literary and artistic works are the sublimation of reality, making beauty more beautiful and ugliness even uglier. If everything is true, it is not literature and art Works, but reportage or documentaries.
If you want to add a hot spot in "The Garland Under the Mountain", the most suitable scene is undoubtedly the scene of Liang Sanxi's sacrifice. In the original work, Liang Sanxi's sacrifice is described in this way.
"Beijing" fought bravely, but lost its opportunity because of several stink bombs made during the ten-year turmoil, and was killed by the enemy; the Ninth Company finally stood on the main peak of the 364 highland. Liang Sanxi was shot to save Zhao Mengsheng. When he was dying, his right hand tightly clutched the pocket on his left breast, and he said weakly to Zhao Mengsheng: "Here... there is me... a bill..." in his jacket pocket The comrades in the army found a blood-stained bill, and every loan recorded on it totaled 620 yuan.
This plot cannot be said to be bad, but it is easy to remind people of the plots used many times in old revolutionary films. When the martyrs sacrificed, they always wanted to ask their comrades to pay the last party fee for themselves. The same plot was used too much. It is easy to make the audience feel aesthetic fatigue, and this paragraph will make the audience feel a little depressed, and it is difficult to explode their emotions.
So what should I change it to? Shen Long quickly searched for film and television works, literature, and even news reports about this war in his mind, and finally the picture in his mind was fixed on a red flag; One of the deepest and most classic memories, right?
This war has left behind many classic pictures showing the heroic nature of our army. Among them, there are three sets of pictures that are the most classic and widely spread. The first picture is the photo of Zhou Qiubo, the hardest-boned scout before his execution. Army scouts went deep into the enemy's rear to investigate, and the captive was stunned by enemy shells. The enemy called foreign reporters and wanted to take pictures of his timid appearance before he died.
When taking pictures, they forced Zhou Qiubo to kneel down to smear the image of our army and boost their morale. However, this hardest-boned scout knew this very well. He vowed not to kneel and stood up struggling with anger of light.
The second one is an oil painting, an oil painting of a blindfolded soldier standing between heaven and earth. This soldier is Shi Guangzhu, a "first-class battle hero". Squad leader and acting platoon leader; in the process of attacking the enemy's positions, Shi Guangzhu was wounded four times in eight places, his left eyeball was knocked out, and his right eyeball was shot into two pieces of shrapnel. Heights 57 and 50 have completed the combat tasks assigned by their superiors.
After the war, Shi Guangzhu was awarded the honorary title of "Battle Hero".
His heroic deeds were also included in the book "Warrior and Powerful Shi Guangzhu" in the comic book library of Bao Bianjiangxian Youth Heroes and Models. Later, an artist created this oil painting based on his deeds.
What is even more rare is that Shi Guangzhu did not give up on himself because of the loss of his eyes, but relied on his tenacious perseverance to overcome unimaginable difficulties and learned Braille. After that, he entered the Chinese Department of Shenzhen University and majored in Chinese Language and Literature. He became the first blind person to obtain a bachelor's degree in my country.
He has created many literary and artistic works, published more than 540 poems and essays in various journals at home and abroad, and won 17 national literary awards. Many works have been translated and widely disseminated by Russia, France, Britain and other countries. "Pavel Korchagin".
Among them, the most famous one is probably the song "Little Grass", which he composed his own lyrics and sang at the 1985 Spring Festival Gala. The song is a household name.
But the most famous one is the "Unfailing Red Flag", which was photographed during the Battle of Liangshan on April 28, 1984. After our soldiers attacked the main peak, they forced the red flag on the main peak. He has actually been sacrificed, and his body and the red flag form a triangle, standing on the battlefield filled with gunpowder.
Unlike the flag-planting photo taken by the U.S. and Soviet troops when they captured Berlin, this photo does not show the joy of "victory", but is full of tragic atmosphere, telling people an ordinary PLA soldier's understanding of loyalty.
The prototype of this photo is Zhang Daquan, the deputy commander of the 2nd Battalion and 5th Company. In front of the hero platform in the cemetery, the land is still guarded.
Some people also say that Liang Sanxi in "The Garland Under the Mountain" is based on him, because when cleaning up Zhang Daquan's relics, the officers and soldiers of the fifth company found a 700 yuan bill owed by the deputy company commander. They did not expect that, Usually, the deputy company commander used his salary to buy canned food for the soldiers to improve their food, but he still had bills owed.
They donated money to repay the debt without telling Zhang Daquan's mother. After Zhang Daquan's mother learned about it, she refused to obey her life and death, and took money from the 2,000 yuan pension to pay back the debt by herself.
This scene is enough to become the breaking point of the whole movie, comparable to the scene when Wang Cheng and Mao Zedong sacrificed, so after Shen Long calmed down, he modified the scene when Liang Sanxi died.
When Jiulian was about to attack the main peak, the flag bearer died, and then Zhao Mengsheng took the red flag and continued to charge. When he reached the top of the mountain, Liang Sanxi found that the remaining enemies were aiming at Zhao Mengsheng. After crossing the red flag, the enemy's bullet hit Liang Sanxi. Liang Sanxi used his last strength to firmly nail the red flag to the peak, and then gradually fell down, forming an unbreakable triangle with the red flag...
After the war, they discovered the IOU in Liang Sanxi's pocket, and then they could continue the rest of the plot. They just modified the details of Liang Sanxi's sacrifice, and the whole work became even more shocking.
Shen Long wrote like a fly, and revised the plot in one breath. After writing, he felt hearty. He picked up the article and read it from the beginning to the end. Then he nodded silently. He has done everything he can, and the next step is to Look at the opinions of the film studio.
He carefully copied the manuscript and handed it to the political commissar.