Chapter 1502: Explosion Point

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There are several main characters in the film: Zhao Mengsheng, Liang Sanxi, Jin Kailai, Gunner Beijing, Zhao Mengsheng's mother Wu Shuang, Lord of Thunder, Commander Lei, etc. Shen Long traced their characteristics one by one in his mind.

Zhao Mengsheng is a young soldier, um, it's not difficult to do, just write like Zhong Yuemin and Yuan Jun. Shen Long is very familiar with this kind of people, but there are still some differences. Of course, Zhong Yuemin and Yuan Jun have various However, if they encounter a war, they will never want to avoid it like Zhao Mengsheng. They must think that their chance to make contributions has come.

Shen Long has seen grassroots commanders like Liang Sanxi many times on the front line. Similarly, in the world of "Bright Sword", Shen Long has also come into contact with many such simple fighters. There are many similarities between himself and Xiao Suizi. Characters, it is not difficult at all to write such characters vividly.

Shen Long has also seen grassroots fighters like Jin Kailai, gunner Beijing, and trumpeter Xiaojin many times, and he is confident in creating such a character image.

Then the remaining problem is the God of Thunder, Commander Lei and Zhao Mengsheng's mother, Wu Shuang. Shen Long has only met senior generals like Commander Lei in the world of "Bright Sword", and Liu Feng has never seen it in this world. You have to find a way to get in touch with such a person in order to have a suitable reason.

It's not difficult to do, just list out the outline first, and then ask Political Commissar Ning for help. He must know some suitable candidates, and then just go meet him and have a chat.

Zhao Mengsheng's mother, Wu Shuang, was originally a selfless old revolutionary. Due to the turmoil of those ten years, she became a long-sleeved and skillful diplomat. Such a person is described in detail in the second half of "Bright Sword", but Liu Feng It is still easy to be questioned if he writes such a character with his own identity, because he cannot get in touch with such a person.

But it doesn't matter, we don't have the wives of senior leaders in our art troupe, but there are children of senior leaders, Hao Shuwen and Chen Can are enough, just call them over for a chat.

Shen Long thought for a while, called Hao Shuwen over, and told her about the matter, Hao Shuwen was immediately filled with righteous indignation, "Yes, that's right, there are such people, even a girl like me dares to go to the front line, a group of big masters like them They are also kind!"

Needless to say, similar things did happen during this period. After all, the past ten years had a great impact on the military, and many people sent their children to the military to escape social turmoil. For example, Zhong Yuemin, Zhang Haiyang, Yuan Jun, and Zhou Xiaobai in "Romance in Blood".

They don't really want their children to be soldiers, they just want to use this place as a safe haven and a springboard for their children to be promoted.

As soon as they encounter a war, they immediately become worried, afraid that their children will have problems, and then try to transfer the children to a safe place.

These people are not all the characters of Zhong Yuemin and Zhang Haiyang who yearn for adventure, war, and meritorious deeds. They will be afraid of war and want to escape, which has a certain impact on the morale of our army.

"There are people like this in our courtyard..." Hao Shuwen talked about some news she heard when talking with her family on the phone in the past few days. Of course, many of these people were punished, and even got involved His parents.

"If you want me to say that they all deserve it, people like this should be expelled directly." Hao Shuwen was a little gloating, but at the same time proud of herself. There is light.

Shen Long wrote down all these, of course without recording the specific names, and then asked Hao Shuwen to go out and call Chen Can in, and asked him the same question.

When Chen Can heard Shen Long's question, he immediately understood that he had already seen through his identity. Although Chen Can was a child of the leader, he had strict requirements on himself, so he naturally looked down on such deserters, so he secretly said A few representative missions were performed, but his character was much more cautious than Hao Shuwen, and he did not mention the specific names and family backgrounds of these people.

And according to Shen Long's estimate, he probably heard about these people from others, and they should not have much to do with their family; this is enough for Shen Long, and he is not a member of the discipline department, and he wants to pursue these people As long as we know that there are such people and such things, it will be fine.

After finishing all this work, Shen Long showed the political commissar the outline and draft, and after getting his approval, he went to the Zhanqi Art Troupe to find Political Commissar Ning and put forward his own request.

"Your book is well written. As soldiers, we should face the problems directly. Since these problems do exist, why can't we write them?" People like Zhao Mengsheng made the senior leaders of the military region very dissatisfied. There have been rumors.

He thought for a while, and introduced several military chiefs to Shen Long who were quite similar in character to Commander Lei. Shen Long had made contributions in the front line before, and most of them readily agreed after hearing Shen Long's name, and met and chatted with Shen Long. , after chatting for a few days, Shen Long also had a solid idea of ​​how to shape a character like Commander Lei.

Then, the next step is to officially revise the article. The beginning must be revised. The original work was written a few years after the war broke out, and the war has just begun.

So Shen Long moved the time forward and changed Director Li, the creator of the song and dance troupe of the Quancheng Military Region, to the creator of the art troupe he was in, and used Xiao Suizi as the prototype.

Xiao Suizi wanted to interview Zhao Mengsheng, who had just won first-class merit, but Zhao Mengsheng said that he felt ashamed and was unwilling to accept the interview. After Xiao Suizi's patient digging, it triggered the next thing.

After listening to Zhao Mengsheng's story about Liang Sanxi, Xiao Suizi was about to go back and write it down for publication when he happened to meet Liang Sanxi's mother who came to pay back the debt, and Zhao Mengsheng's wife, who was a military doctor, came to the front with them. She also came to support the front line.

At the end, Zhao Mengsheng and others sent flowers to Liang Sanxi and other martyrs. They saw Commander Lei in the crowd, and only then did they know that the gunner Beijing was Commander Lei's son.

With a little modification like this, the whole story will conform to the current logic, and the specific details can be adjusted according to the materials I collected on the front line.

It took a few days for Shen Long to finish writing the whole story, but when he read it carefully after writing, Shen Long was still a little dissatisfied. He felt that this work still lacked a bursting point that could ignite the audience.