Summary at the End of the Volume

Hello readers, this is Mengyun, thank you very much for coming to read my book.

The world of Harry Potter has come to an end. Although there were many twists and turns in the process, and there were many awkward places, I finally finished this copy by stumbling.

How should I put it? I can probably give myself a score of 70 points. Let’s talk about it bit by bit.

First, it is a question of the choice of this world. In this regard, I chose "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" as the plot base, and adopted the world line after Delphi's victory. This is also the "Wind Rises" in this volume. "Part of the origin is, after all, as Voldemort said at the end, the wind corresponds to time, and there is such a metaphor.

The second layer of metaphor is that Yang Yun himself represents this storm of change. Chu Xuan has hinted it many times, and as the wise man of the Zhongzhou team, he has independently completed his own layout for the first time.

The result is gratifying. Qi Tengyi and Lingdian did not die, and they did not leave more regrets like Na Wu.

However, the problem with this is that "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" exists in the form of a stage play and has not been made into a movie. Its popularity is not as good as Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them, and its characters also have many OOC and The shortcomings in the plot have led to the vast majority of readers not having seen this work.

There is nothing I can do about it. Who asked me to choose this world? I have to finish writing it with tears in my eyes.

In fact, I originally wanted to write a story about time travel and plot changes. When I chose Harry Potter as the blueprint, I originally wanted to write a world view similar to The Man in the High Castle, where Voldemort occupied Hogwarts. And Dumbledore was forced to flee and so on... But after writing and writing, I found that that world view seemed more suitable to be a separate book, so it finally became what it is now.

Maybe it would be better to write it that way, but who knows about that kind of thing.

Second, there is a problem with the plot arrangement. This volume has about 200,000 words, which is almost as much as the previous four volumes combined... Of course, as a completely changed new world, it needs to serve as a link between the past and the next. There are enough foreshadowings to prepare for future returns. I personally think this length is acceptable.

The only problem is that I crammed too many elements into this volume.

Zheng Zha, Zhang Jie and Yang Yun's triangle werewolf killing, about the question of "who is the real leader"; the team battle of the Indian team, allowing the members of the Zhongzhou team to give full play to the problem of not being reduced to soy sauce; and the plot The issues of character arrangement, characterization and foreshadowing...

I adopted the method of writing in teams, finishing one side of the story before writing the other side, but this writing method may not be liked by many people.

I tried my best to describe the personality traits of all the characters and what they would do in the current situation. In fact, I think that the characters I wrote are not OOC, but this way I have to spend more pen and ink... ...Maybe the details are appropriate and this is something I should learn from.

Thirdly, regarding the issue of Zheng Zha’s fight taking too long, this is because I personally was not satisfied with the fighting scene, so I revised it seven or eight times. One-third the length... I would rather add some details to make the battle scenes more exciting.

But at present, it seems that many people don’t like it, so I will make adjustments next to give readers a better reading experience.

Maybe it’s because the general environment is no longer ten years ago. I actually buried a lot of foreshadowing in the fifth volume, and the biggest one is about butterflies flapping their wings and strong winds blowing... For now, I haven’t seen readers figure it out.

So, let’s leave the suspense to the plot of the next return.

Finally, let me talk nonsense. I know that the opening chapter is very discouraging, and I also know that the positive and negative settings are outdated, but these things are not useless.

I would like to ask you, readers, to think about how I can write something new and different from this "outdated" setting.

Please look forward to the next volume, "Taking Advantage of the Heaven".