Chapter 852 Not Interested

Kong Xian opened "Steins;Gate", and the first thing she saw was a young man in a white coat, talking on the phone, behind him was a building.

A large instrument smashed into the top floor of the building.

The colors are so heavy that the background is somewhat blurred, which makes Kong Xian feel a kind of depression in her heart. But whether it is the composition of the coloring pages, or the drawing of the characters and scenery, they are all in place, and the colors also highlight the tone of the whole novel - deep.

Sure enough, at the beginning of the first chapter, there are many unique places.

After Gang Lun witnessed Hong Liqi's death, he saw Hong Liqi again, which should prove that he has time-traveled, but he didn't know it, because he traveled to a "parallel world".

There are quite a lot of time travel texts in light novels, but most of them are about the protagonist having an accident and traveling to another world, while Gang Lun returned to the parallel world because he sent a text message.

However, to say it is a parallel world, it is better to say that because of Gang Lun's time travel, the things around him have changed.

The angle of the story is good, and this kind of writing has never appeared before, but the essence of this novel is still time travel.

This was the first thought that popped up in Kong Xian's mind after seeing Gang Lun's text message to Ah Zhi, and the surrounding changes.

Afterwards, the author changed his style of writing, and Gang Lun returned to the laboratory and had a conversation with Zhen Youli and Azhi.

I have to say that another's drawing skills are really good. The illustrations in the article clearly draw the appearance and personality of the three characters.

It's just that the story suddenly jumps from Hong Liqi's death to daily life, which really makes people a little confused.

"Steins;Gate" has only updated four chapters on the app. It tells the story of Hong Li living in the public class and responding to Gang Lun's doubts. After that, Gang Lun met the "shining acupressure teacher" Tong Mengyu...

Kong Xian finished reading the four chapters in one breath without feeling the slightest effort.

After confirming that it was the last page of "Steins;Gate", Kong Xian showed regret on her face.

"How about it?"

"Not bad. Although I'm not sure whether other people can understand it, but the flow of the story is very good, which makes people have the urge to read... Others don't know, but I am looking forward to the progress of the next story."

Kong Xian turned to the last page, saw the comment area of ​​"Stones;Gate", and noticed a post saying that there was a follow-up plot, so she clicked in curiously.

"I also think it's okay, but the words are not concise enough. There are some online light novels with better literary talent, the description of the scenery, and the description of the characters are better than it."

"Do you know why this novel doesn't have a big introduction to the characters?" Kong Xian asked.

"Why?"

"No need. No matter how good the author's description of the characters is, can there be color pages to make it intuitive? No. If you don't believe it, you can find a novel without illustrations, read two or three chapters, and compare it with this novel. Hong Liqi and Zhen Yuli still come to mind. Why do we need words when we can clearly do things with pictures?"

"Eh?"

Zeng Yue wondered if he heard it wrong, a light novel editor-in-chief actually recommended illustrations here.

"But, novels should pay more attention to writing style?"

"I know, this person called another, if he wrote the novel, his writing style is not bad. It's just a little bit of water. If it is to be published, it must be 'squeezed'." Kong Xian explained, looking at the novel just now. "Many people pay too much attention to literary talent. In fact, novels care more about the author's writing skills. Of course, many newcomers lack writing skills, so it seems a bit naive."

"The writing power of this novel...isn't it enough?" Zeng Yue hesitated.

Comics also pay attention to writing skills, which is reflected in the dialogue.

Limited by the length of the dialogue, cartoonists should try to use as few words as possible to express the words of the characters.

Cartoonists are not writers, they can only be as good as possible, but they can't achieve the ultimate.

"It's not enough, it's okay. It's much better than those light novelists selected from the Internet. In terms of writing strength, it's complicated.

It is also very vague, such as line drawing, such as practicing calligraphy, these all belong to the category of writing skills, but light novels are not so complicated. The key point is whether the author can express the picture imagined in his mind.

"Some authors imagine all kinds of exciting pictures in their minds, but they fall on paper, but they are as flat as water...Of course, "Steins;Gate" is also flat, but apart from the first chapter, it talks about daily life, is The encounter between Gang Lun and A Zhi was going to the public class, so the novel seems plain, but when Hongli is lying in a pool of blood, readers will feel nervous again.

"At the same time, another will also mobilize readers' emotions. Therefore, although it looks plain, but it can attract readers, many authors who have just entered the industry, or even have been in the industry for a few years, may not grasp it well."

"So powerful?" Hearing what Kong Xian said, Zeng Yue put away his contempt for the novel.

"another also has shortcomings, and it is obvious that it is 'water'. His writing power is sufficient in this novel, but it is not concise enough. If it is to be published, it is estimated that some content will need to be revised...another_online?"

Kong Xian softly read another's Weibo name, picked up the mobile phone on the coffee table, and found another's Weibo based on the name.

"...a light novelist who is interested...the number of followers, 13,000...19 chapters?"

Seeing the latest Weibo post, Kong Xian immediately regained her spirits.

"Chapter 19?"

"Huh? Has it been serialized to chapter 19?" Zeng Yue asked curiously.

"you do not know?"

"I don't know, I didn't read the comment section." Zeng Yue picked up the pad and entered another's Weibo name.

The top Weibo is the novel in Chapter 19.

Kong Xian just nodded, but her eyes fell on the phone screen.

There are 15 chapters that she didn't read. It is not long, but after careful evaluation, she found that these 15 chapters have more than 200,000 words.

When a reader encounters a novel he likes, he never feels that the novel is too long.

More than 200,000 words, that's a lot to say. When Kong Xian started to read the rest of "Stones;Gate", she felt that the time passed quickly, and before she knew it, the sky had already dimmed.

Zeng Yue yawned. Seeing that all the editors in the office had left, he glanced at Kong Xian who was reading a novel, with a helpless expression—she didn't go back to her editorial department either. What if something happened in the editorial department?

"Hey, Miss Kong, it's time to go." Zeng Yue reminded.

"Oh, I see." Kong Xian stood up, rubbed her eyes, and glanced at the time, 20:22.

"It's so late?" Kong Xian was a little surprised.

"Yeah, everyone is gone..." Zeng Yue coughed dryly, "How do you read the novel?"

"It's not bad, it's better than most of the light novels serialized on the Internet... The quality is still very high. But I don't know why, but the atmosphere is always a bit depressing, probably related to the illustrations."

"illustration?"

"Hmm. There was a rather scary illustration just now, a picture of a puppet stained with blood..."

"Hearing you say that, it feels a bit like a ghost story."

Zeng Yue turned off the lights in the office, while Kong Xian stood up, looked down at the novel, and walked out of Qingyue's office.

Zeng Yue shook his head, and there was a trace of suspicion in his heart—is it really that good-looking?

When he turned off the last light, Kong Xian who was standing outside the door suddenly let out a soft cry, which made Zeng Yue tremble all over.

"What's wrong?"

"No...it's nothing." Kong Xian was blushing red, hesitating.

On the elevator, Zeng Yue kept staring at Kong Xian, her brows were tightly furrowed, and her expression was so tense that Zeng Yue was also curious about what she saw.

It wasn't until the elevator came to the first floor that Kong Xian breathed a sigh of relief, as if she had stepped out of a novel.

"What did you see? So fascinated." Zeng Yue was a little curious.

"Zhen Youli is dead." Kong Xian's tone was very flat.

"Eh? How did you die?"

"It's complicated to say. Gang Lun used the time machine to go back in time, but no matter what he did, he couldn't save Zhen Youli..." Kong Xian sighed, "If I guessed correctly, the previous 17 chapters It's all foreshadowing, and the story doesn't really get exciting until chapter 18. I left a private message to another, hoping to publish this novel..."

"What did he say?" Zeng Yue asked curiously, seeing that Kong Xian cared so much about a novel.

"No reply. But for him, this should be a good opportunity, right? After all, not every novel has the opportunity to be published." Kong Xian laughed.

She is still very confident about this.

If it is not for publication, the other party does not need to serialize.

At this moment, Kong Xian's cell phone rang.

She quickly picked up the phone, raised her eyebrows, and said with a smile: "Yes...he replied."

Zeng Yue smacked his mouth, secretly thinking that Kong Xian was lucky, and any book he picked up at random was of high quality.

But soon, he noticed that Kong Xian's expression was not right, as if she was a little angry or disappointed.

Is there something wrong?

"What's wrong?" Zeng Yue asked hastily.

Kong Xian bit her lip and took two deep breaths, as if she was being bullied, and there was a little anger in her words, "He said, he's not interested."

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