Chapter 45: Su Han's Game Text

【Chapters 41-44 have been revised. It is recommended that those who read the previous novels before July 14 should re-read them, because there will be some differences. 】

When Xi Muzhen saw Ji Yinxuan following behind Shen Xin and entering the living room, the book in his hand fell to the ground with a "clack", his mouth was slightly opened, and he was speechless in surprise.

After Ji Yinxuan nodded slightly to Xi Muzhen, she sat on the sofa, but the little girl was still at a loss. Finally, under Shen Xin's reminder, she remembered that there was a guest at home, and hurriedly made a cup of black tea for Ji Yinxuan.

When he came to the kitchen, Xi Muzhen secretly asked Shen Xin: "Brother, who is this girl? She is so beautiful."

"Her? The student council president of Yunhai University." Shen Xin took out a bottle of mineral water from the refrigerator.

"President of the student council? Then what is she doing here? Did you get arrested for something? She didn't come to visit her house, did she?" Xi Muzhen said in a panic.

"What are you talking about? She wants me to design her game." Shen Xin said casually.

"Then why did you bring her here?" Xi Muzhen puffed his cheeks, a little dissatisfied.

"These things can't be discussed in the studio, right?" Shen Xin asked.

Xi Muzhen blinked his eyes, and what Shen Xin said seemed to be correct.

Putting the teacup in front of Ji Yinxuan, Xi Muzhen immediately sat down on the couch next to her.

After Ji Yinxuan said "Thank you", she gracefully picked up her teacup and took a sip.

Shen Xin sat down and put the file bag on the table, "Okay, can I read the text of the game now?"

Ji Yinxuan nodded slightly, "Please go ahead."

Xi Muzhen also leaned over, looking at the text in Shen Xin's hand eagerly.

"What's wrong?" Shen Xin asked puzzled.

"No, I just want to take a look." Xi Muzhen said with interest.

"This is a romance script." Shen Xin reminded.

"Oh, I've been reading romance novels recently, and I've also read "Y's", isn't it also romance novels?" Xi Muzhen asked.

This is really the case.

Shen Xin scratched her head, most of the love novels brought by Sister Yan were read by the little girl.

Ji Yinxuan raised her head and looked at Xi Muzhen, feeling a little surprised, then lowered her head and looked at the black tea held in both hands.

Shen Xin stopped arguing with Xi Muzhen, and focused on the text, while Xi Muzhen's eyes were also fixed on the script.

"The Trouble of Choice?"

Shen Xin read the title lightly, feeling that the title of the book is not good. He would have preferred the line to be the title of a chapter rather than the title of a book.

Afterwards, Shen Xin turned over the title page, and together with Xi Muzhen, quickly browsed through the text.

Different books have different reading methods.

Books such as masterpieces should be "chewed slowly", while online novels do not need to be so detailed.

The text of the game is slightly different from the online novel, but Shen Xin just wants to know the outline of the story, and only seeks to understand the meaning, so the page turning speed is very fast.

Before time travel, Shen Xin read a lot of online novels, and she could read a million words a day, and her reading speed was very fast. Of course, this also benefited from the "watering method" of online novels, reading a chapter or two less, Nothing was missing at all.

I remember that some authors missed a chapter and apologized to readers. Readers say, it's okay, the rhythm is just right. This embarrasses the author too.

For about half an hour, Shen Xin read the general idea of ​​the text at random. Xi Muzhen took the text from Shen Xin and continued to sort out the process of the text.

At first, Shen Xin felt that the title of the book was not good, but now she has to admit that the title of the book matches the story well.

In the game, the character controlled by the player is an ordinary high school boy, but he has enviable love luck. The male protagonist and his childhood sweetheart's female neighbor are classmates, and the same table is the girl whom the male protagonist likes.

His fiancée is the student council president, and the class teacher is a female character like the big sister next door. So many girls appeared in the first chapter, isn't it just a troublesome choice.

Only in the first part of the game, there are four girls who have a close relationship with the male protagonist. As a galgame, Shen Xin thinks this amount should be enough. Players' different choices in the game will affect the favorability of different characters, so they can choose different side tasks and achieve different endings. This part also requires a lot of text, and at the same time, the length of the game can also be controlled within an appropriate range.

Shen Xin then picked up "Character Setting".

The character setting is very thin, only about five or six pages. After turning over a page or two, Shen Xin suddenly felt that something was wrong, so she quickly flipped through the character setting, counted the number of characters on it, and there was a black line at the end.

There are a total of 11 characters in this game. Except for the male protagonist, the rest are all girls, and most of them are around fifteen or sixteen years old.

"Sister, what does the following text look like?" Shen Xin asked Ji Yinxuan.

"It's about the same as this part." Ji Yinxuan raised her head, but her eyes were a little weak, "What do you think of the text?"

"To be honest, it's not very good. If you want me to draw, you'd better change the script, at least to my satisfaction. If you don't want to change the script, then you can find another person to set the characters. Sorry." Shen Xin said face apologetic.

"Is it really bad?" Ji Yinxuan asked quickly.

"Senior is also a person who has played games. Even if it is a galgame, she should have more contact with it than I do. There are ten heroines in a galgame, and the settings are similar. There is nothing new. At least, the character, appearance, and background of the characters ... These should be different, right? Cute, arrogant, quiet, indifferent... Each type of female character should have one, so that after the player "raids" one of the characters, he will only want to be in the second week ', attack other characters."

To be honest, Shen Xin was a little frustrated.

After time travelling, in his field of vision, the author who appears the most is Su Han. "Faltering" is okay, after all, anti-time travel rarely appears in this world, and it can be regarded as an innovation, and "Punishment" made Shen Xin associate her with Oba Tsugumi.

Therefore, he also has high expectations for this text.

Ji Yinxuan's previous attitude had actually told Shen Xin that there might be problems with this work, but he still took chances, but he didn't expect such a result.

"Sure enough." Ji Yinxuan held up her teacup and took a sip of tea with a gloomy look in her eyes, "I can also see that these things are more like novels than game texts. But it's okay for me to type code, write The article is not enough to read at all, such a large text, I can't change it at all."

"Then find someone to write it." Shen Xin said casually.

"Who do I ask to write? No one is willing to write such a large text. Moreover, Xiao Su's energy is also devoted to "Crime and Punishment", and she has no time for him." Ji Yinxuan sighed.

Shen Xin thought for a while, what Ji Yinxuan said is also true. Even college students, few people will be exposed to the creation of game text.

"Well...can I say something?" Xi Muzhen quietly raised his hand.

"Of course." Ji Yinxuan nodded.

Xi Muzhen took a deep breath, "Has sister Su Han never been in love?"

"Eh?" Ji Yinxuan was surprised at first, then raised her head and thought for half a minute, "It seems that there is no, can you tell?"

"Yeah. Although the female characters and the male protagonist are related, when the male protagonist talks to one of the female characters, the other female characters standing next to him take it for granted and don't feel jealous at all. I think It's not normal." Xi Muzhen said.

"That's right. Because Xiao Su has never been in a relationship, so I don't know what the state of the lover is." Ji Yinxuan nodded repeatedly, and her eyes became brighter when she looked at Xi Muzhen, "Sister, you don't know how to talk. Are you in love?"

Shen Xin immediately became alert and looked at Xi Muzhen warily.

"No way!" A blush crept up to Xi Muzhen's ears in an instant, "It's all written in love novels, and... Brother Xin's comics are also mentioned. I'm just summarizing... summarizing recently."