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Xi Muhan and Wang Wenhong tried not to laugh, but Shen Xin was not angry, she pushed the pastry in front of Wu Xiaoli and Chi Yue, and opened "Comic Future" by herself.

"Xianyuan", as the name suggests, is a fairy tale comic.

Shen Xin has read some fairy tale novels, but not many fairy tale comics.

The beginning of this comic uses common time travel, and the whole person travels to the fairy world. In order to speed up the pace, it does not tell how this person travels in the first place, but at the beginning of the story, the protagonist is in this world. After living for two months, I used the method of interludes to tell about the past.

In fact, the types of time travel are common in comics and novels. How to describe time travel also has its own method. Some begin to describe what happened and how to time travel, while others omit this step.

Chi Yue's painter is not very good, nor is it the kind that has no rules at all. On the contrary, the use of storyboards is quite reasonable.

After time-traveling, the protagonist makes a living by using the knowledge before time-traveling to make a living by "calculation and hexagram". But the protagonist's method is not effective every time. Once he was caught by a Taoist priest, saying that he slandered Taoism, and dragged him to a Taoist temple. With the idea of ​​not starving to death, the protagonist begs the Taoist priest to let him become a Taoist...

In addition to the slightly routine bridges crossed, in other aspects, whether the protagonist failed to pretend to be X and was caught by a Taoist priest, or the protagonist took the initiative to become a Taoist priest in order to make a living, Shen Xin was surprised.

However, after the protagonist became a Taoist priest, the plot seemed too stable, introducing plots such as gymnasiums and preaching with other Taoist priests. After about three or four episodes, until monsters appeared in the nearby forest, the story became tense again...

Later, the protagonist is captured by the monster and witnesses the little Taoist priest who was captured with him being eaten by the monster.

Of course, the main character gets caught... well...

In fact, there are not many in the comics, because the protagonist is usually beaten to death if he can beat him, or he can’t beat him. There are also more famous protagonists who are caught, such as Xiaojie in "Hunter x Hunter", who was killed by phantom The brigade was caught.

This also shows that most authors can't handle this kind of routine-many readers don't like to see the protagonist get caught.

Even in "Hunter x Hunter", Yoshihiro Togashi used a lot of pen and ink to portray the Phantom Troupe before Xiaojie and Qi Ya were arrested. Even, during the Kulabica exam, someone pretended to be the Phantom Troupe. group. After these preparations, Xiaojie was arrested, and readers can accept it.

But the plot in "Xian Yuan" is a bit straightforward, and under the premise of the Taoist priest's reminder, he was still caught, which is somewhat inappropriate.

The last two chapters are also the ones with the best grades, and they are also the places where there are more scoldings. It is because the protagonist meets the soul of a little girl and helps him escape from the predicament, but is possessed by the little girl and loses consciousness.

"Worthless!"

Shen Xin can guess the readers' comments without looking at it.

This comic has bright spots, but its shortcomings are more obvious. It can even be said that the shortcomings far outweigh the advantages. Otherwise, "Xianyuan" would not be the current achievement.

"Old...teacher...how is it?" Chi Yue was a little nervous.

"Uh..." Shen Xin was silent for a moment, "Xianxia-like comics... are rarely seen on "Comic Future". Of course, I'm not saying that such comics are bad. "Future" is a kind of fresh blood. I like the first chapter very much, especially because the protagonist is pierced by a Taoist priest because of his lack of knowledge. The length of the words. If I am a reader, I have no idea what the purpose of reading this comic is.

"

Chi Yue's face paled instantly.

"Don't be nervous, you know what I want to say?" Shen Xin smiled.

Chi Yue shook his head.

"Normal people encounter this kind of situation, it is this kind of reflection, most of the Xianxia world also have daily life, this is what you want to express, right?"

Chi Yue nodded, "That's right."

"But you have to be clear, what readers want to see, they don't want to see how real the protagonist is - no matter how real you write, it is also a person on paper, can it be more real than the readers themselves? Impossible? So, what readers want to see It is the protagonist who is different. Even if he is also a cultivator, the protagonist must have his own uniqueness. Therefore, the next adventure is very important, that is, the protagonist is caught... This plot actually has shortcomings, but fortunately there are There is a change, but in the end he loses consciousness, which makes readers feel that the protagonist is too useless."

"I did this for a reason. That little girl will live in the protagonist's body..."

"Then is this body the protagonist's, or the little girl's? The little girl lives in the male protagonist's body. Will the little girl have to see with her own eyes what the male protagonist eats, drinks, and messes with in the future?"

"No... I have no such plan?" Chi Yue waved her hands quickly.

"Then what are you going to do about it?"

"..." Chi Yue was at a loss for words, "Teacher... readers scolded a lot for these two words."

"Don't worry about it. What really determines the success or failure of a manga is the grades. Besides, there are more readers who don't scold you. Right?"

"Then... Teacher, how do I change it?" Chi Yue was bewildered.

Changing...Of course there is a way, but Shen Xin doesn't intend to say it.

"You are the editor in charge. How to discuss the plot with you is her business. If I say too much, I will do it for you. Moreover, Xiao Li has been an editor for more than ten years, and this problem is still difficult for her. By the way, I heard that , are you a cartoonist from outside the industry?"

"It doesn't count, does it? I majored in history in college. When I was in school, I studied art for more than a year. After graduation, I studied by myself for more than a year. Later, I worked as an assistant to Mr. Wang Yunze until the work was accepted. I just quit my job as an assistant." Chi Yue felt a little embarrassed, "So, the painter is really not very solid."

"Teacher Wang..." Shen Xin nodded, "Your painters don't panic, the level of painting will improve after a long time."

With this sentence, Shen Xin did not lie.

The original one of "One Punch Man", although the painting was criticized by many people, but the artist has also improved. In the second half of "Psychic 100%", the artist obviously improved.

Also, the author of "Giant", Isayama Tsutomu, when "Giant" was serialized, his drawing skills were not good, but after that, his drawing skills have improved a lot.

Of course, compared with those cartoonists with solid basic skills, their drawing skills are still not outstanding, but they are much better after all.

So, it's not that cartoonists don't value the artist, but they are a little behind compared to the plot and the storyboard.

It may be because he served as Wang Yunze's assistant, or it may be other reasons. Chi Yuehua's storyboard is not bad. Although the plot is a bit slow, it is important to be stable, but the pressure of performance does not allow him to follow the steps. Fortunately, Wu Xiaoli I can also see that it is obviously speeding up. As long as the following plot does not collapse, the score should improve.

There is no doubt that in this type of comics, as the protagonist grows up, his grades will gradually improve.