Chapter 278 Literature Girl

Tang En slapped the table hard, threw back a few manuscripts handed in by an elf beauty, and shouted: "No! Unqualified! Go back and rewrite! Remember! Three golden chapters! Three golden chapters!"

Tang En's roar made the beautiful elf in front of her tremble in fright, her ears drooped, her neck was shrunk and her head was lowered with a look of embarrassment.

She is a very popular poet in Emerald Corolla, and the poems she wrote are very popular with her sisters. She originally thought that she could easily complete Tang En's task, and handed in a new work with confidence, but unexpectedly Unqualified.

"Don't you understand what the three golden chapters are!? Let me explain to you again! The protagonist, contradiction, outbreak, and goal should appear in the first three chapters. If necessary, the golden finger should also be written. There is only one purpose for all , just to cheer up the readers!"

"But if there is no foreshadowing," the elf girl defended in a low voice, "there is no story at all..."

"No storytelling required! Readers don't care what story is being told, they're impatient! They just need to be cool! It's enough to be cool!"

Tang En slapped the table and shouted: "But look at what you wrote? Ah? 'Morning light dispels the mist, the girl walks on the waves, the goddess descends the hymn, and the evil will be purified'? Are you kidding me? Vernacular , do you understand the vernacular?"

The beautiful elf poet trembled, shook her head hastily, and stared blankly at Tang En with big watery eyes.

"From the main point of view, what you wrote is a story about a heroine, and this alone has already been rejected!"

"On the first page there are only these four sentences. Judging from the style of writing, although it is concise enough, it has no sense of rhythm. What about the name of the protagonist? What is the purpose of the protagonist walking on waves? What is the purpose of the goddess sending down the holy light?" Is it a golden finger? Is it a blessing? Or is it strengthening the protagonist's body? You didn't write it clearly! And the last sentence, aren't you talking nonsense? Everyone knows that evil will definitely lose in the end, so readers don't care about this Point, what they care about is how the protagonist slaps his face, how he pretends to be aggressive, how cool he is!"

"Let me repeat your four sentences in the correct way, so you can experience it."

Tang En pondered for a while, and under the gaze of the beautiful elf poet, he said slowly: "It's dawn, our protagonist A wakes up at home on time, and then he quickly climbed to the window on the second floor, and the young and beautiful girl B next door followed the usual routine. Get used to taking a bath—depending on the age limit of the work, this paragraph can be further refined or simplified—after taking a bath, a holy light suddenly descended from the sky, and the goddess discovered that A was peeping at her saint while taking a bath, so she punished him!"

"But, who is A? He is the protagonist of the story! Therefore, the goddess has to kneel and lick when she comes! Under the offensive of the protagonist's three-inch tongue, the goddess returned satisfied, and gave the protagonist A a big gift bag before leaving , strengthened the power of the protagonist A, and then purified his body, taught him some skills, and then gave the protagonist A a task, the evil Z is about to wake up, in order to save the world, he must bring his childhood sweetheart B on the road together to save the world ——Why did you bring B with you? As the main character, someone must warm the bed at night.”

"Then, the protagonist went to look for B, but unexpectedly met the villain C who had always had a crush on B. C taunted the protagonist A and tried his best to gain hatred, and then A slapped C to death, successfully slapped him in the face, harvested childhood sweetheart B, and brought Together, B embarked on the journey of saving the world and expelling evil, defeating the enemy D along the way, conquering the beauty E, defeating the enemy F, and conquering the beauty G..."

Speaking of this, Tang En spread his hands: "Look, isn't it better to write like this? Also, use the vernacular! Do you understand the vernacular? It's just plain and straightforward, don't beat around the bush, just say what you have."

"oh……"

The beautiful elf poet nodded half-understood: "In short, it is to defeat the enemy and collect beauties?"

"Savvy! What's your name?"

Although her writing was average, she was the first one who had the courage to submit the manuscript, and she could be regarded as a key training target, which is why Tang En put so much effort into it.

"Danterian."

"..."

Tang En was silent for a moment, and said earnestly: "If you have time, look through your bookshelves more, maybe you will awaken some strange attributes."

Danterian looked puzzled.

"Go back and change it. Remember, our main readers are men, so we have to write this story from a male perspective. As for the story from a female perspective, that's a matter of the future."

What Isalie wants is to increase the population of the elves. If men don't have that idea, how can they increase the population? At this time, of course, it is necessary to develop some corresponding literary works, and Long Aotian, who has opened the big stallion mode, fully meets the conditions!

"oh……"

Danterian hesitated for a moment, then asked in a low voice: "Tang En, the world you mentioned earlier...do you have any reference materials?"

Tang En's eyes lit up: "Are you interested?"

"Um……"

Danterian nodded: "I always feel that the story you told is not a fictional story, but a real world. If there are reference materials and played under that framework, I should be able to write a story that allows A story that satisfies you."

"It's not to satisfy me, I'm just to inspire you."

Tang En corrected her: "The stories you write are ultimately for Queen Isalie to read."

After speaking, Tang En laughed again: "However, asking you to write this kind of article directly is a bit too embarrassing for you, so..."

Tang En waved his hand, took out a stack of papers, and said triumphantly, "This is the outline of the story I wrote for you last night. You can take it down and pass it around separately for your study."

"Very good!"

Danterian's eyes lit up, she took the outline, and said confidently: "Don't worry, I swear in the name of the goddess, I will definitely - I will write this novel!"

"What a child can teach..."

Watching Danterian leave, Tang En said, "Next."

A blond elf girl confidently handed in the manuscript: "This is a cartoon I drew."

"oh."

Tang En just glanced over and took a breath for a moment: "What's your name?"

"three--"

Tang En's eyes twitched, don't tell me her name is Sanqianyuan...

"Clover."

The elf girl Sanye happily pointed to the hair ornament on her head and said, "Because the seed that accompanied me left three leaves."

"call."

Tang En breathed a sigh of relief: "Sanye...that what..."

"Um?"

"You... what you draw is not called a manga..."

Tang En held those few manuscript papers, his hands were trembling: "This is a sketch..."

The scripts that Sanye brought up have no problems with the storyboard, story, and rhythm. Except that the story still fails to break out of Prandal's circle, everything else is impeccable. It can even be said that even if it is brought to the earth, it can instantly It was an instant hit - because her drawing is so scary!

These are not comics at all, but sketches one by one!

Every character, every detail, every tree leaf, and even every blade of grass in every grid can clearly see the veins above!

It's too realistic!

"Aren't you tired of painting like this? How long did it take?"

"I'm not tired, and it hasn't been long. Using magic to increase the speed is quite fast."

With a slight smile on Sanye's face: "It's only time for a meal. The main reason is that it takes a little time to conceive a story, but it doesn't take much time to draw a picture."

I found a treasure!

Tang En was ecstatic in his heart, what is Kim Jung-ki on earth! ? This clover is simply Prandal's human flesh printer!

"Very good!"

Tang En grabbed his hands: "Besides this style of painting, can you master other styles of painting? Exaggerated? Funny? Concise?"

Sanye was a little uncertain: "It should be fine..."

"good!"

Tang En finally saw hope: "From now on, the artist of the official book will be decided to be you!"

Sanye was stunned for a moment: "What is an official book?"

"I'll tell you later."

Tang En chuckled, and patted Sanye's shoulder: "In the future, other people will be responsible for conceiving the story. All you have to do is to draw the original manuscript. I believe that Queen Isalie and Egwen know your contribution. I'm sure you'll be very happy."

"It's my pleasure."

After watching Sanye leave, Tang En rubbed his hands, a little impatient.

Judging from the current learning speed, they will still be constrained by Prandal's inertial thinking in a short period of time, and it will be difficult for them to display their true strength. If they want to come up with something that satisfies Isalie, Tang En has to do it himself. .

However, he is not good at drawing or writing.

So Tang En came up with other ideas.

To see the results immediately, the best way is to personally guide them and let them complete the first work under the condition of their own teaching, and then they will understand what the market demand is.

The outline that Tang En gave them before was the first step. Next, Tang En decided to come up with a detailed outline. Not only that, but there are also some very... well, adult things, anyway, it is what Isalie needs. He didn't have any psychological pressure to take it out, but Tang En felt an inexplicable sense of excitement when he thought of cultivating those silly elves and beauties to create these things.

What did he take out?

Of course, they are the sex enlightenment teachers of many people on the earth. They are all famous works. As long as the original framework is modified and the heavy-tasting content is removed, some milder works will be born.

If just the words are not enough, Sanye's ghost-like painter, the official book drawn is absolutely sharp, and the effect of putting it together is self-evident.

It is foreseeable that these things will definitely stimulate the needs of the elves in some way.

Of course, perhaps due to the simplicity of the elves, they may awaken slowly, but what Tang En has to do is to awaken their consciousness step by step. Once they start to awaken, the subsequent things will have nothing to do with him.